All Comments on 'Shy Jared Ch. 01'

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nomoretears00nomoretears00about 13 years ago
Wow...

very intense, lol, as usual. You really have a way with building tension :) I can't wait for... whatever you come out with next!!! LOL.

seeker71seeker71about 13 years ago
Dang it!

My southern ire is up. You keep putting up amazing stories then saying "like it, good, now suffer". We have to wait for Simon to end his journey. I never question a writers reasoning, so I will wait for the next chapter.

Peace and joy,

Shell

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Loved it!

The writer is so descriptive with his characters, feel as though you know exactly what they look like. I love the affection the older guy has for the younger one - and it made me so horny and hard when they were close to each other. Looking forward to future chapters and hope some day I will meet another young guy who will make me really happy and let me explore his body and bring him to a climax - wow - thanks xx

BellatrixieBellatrixieover 12 years ago
Beautiful

That was wonderful. Gently unfolding and shy and hesitant so that you could feel Jared's own sense of wonder at what was unfolding. I will enjoy reading this series.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Umm

Wouldn't be logical to get up in arms about teacher student moral boundaries when just got finished with Poor Simon but weirdly that did cross my mind at first. Perhaps because this is more realistic? No matter, enjoying the seduction.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
A Very Tender Story

I loved this story. The tenderness between the older man and younger boy is beautiful. You are gifted writer.

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