All Comments on 'Sian and Her Twin Sister Ch. 04'

OK, this is a bitch of a cliff hanger! Don't leave us hanging here.

BTW, it's 'wander' as in, she let her mind wander, not wonder. As in, 'I wonder where she's going.' There are other minor editorial shortcomings. Just proofread. ;)

All in all, a good series going here. Kudos.

I agree. Need to know if she is ok. Next episode please

Love this story totaly cant wait for the next part hopefuly this will be a much longer story with many more parts love and hate that clif hanger

What a cliffhanger man. Something tells me this is going back to Sians headache and when she hit her head. Going to be hard to wait for the next chapter. Great story. Hope she is ok. Just wrong to leave it there. Keep up the great work.

I have read too many sad ending stories lately.

They are beautiful and heartrending, but they still make me sad.

Nice story...going well...appears to be some potential for expansion there as the little sister helping to care for the twin once she comes home....or perhaps some expansion on the dream the twin had about the brother doing rhe younger sister....

Thanks for all the comments.

I will occasionally update my bio with news about the next chapter and things like that, so be sure to check every now and then.

I'm loving the story so far and I can't wait to read what you'll come up with, now I do hope that everything turns out well for the twins.

P.S. A bit of editing wouldn't hurt either ;)

Please hurry up with the next chapter. I can't wait to find out what happens next

i love this story i hope it turns into a 30 part story you sence of detection is very good and you can feel the story like your there seeing it real life