All Comments on 'Signs Ch. 01'

Not sure where this is going but want to find out, Thanks.

This is a terrific start to a story, and we eagerly look forward to see where you will take us. It's wonderful to see you posting again.

Thanks, ohio

name this morning. Great to have you back with us. Complex initial chapter. looking forward to more!

Good first chapter. I'm very pleased to see another story from you.

when I see your name I can expect a well written, very, very entertaining story and again you have not disappointed.

What is he dreading? Why do I think I know? Why does it hurt so much? Damn!

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Lots of great details, especially - and maybe a bit to much - emotionally.

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Will see where it goes.

No cheating? Interesting...

That is an excellent start. What would push it from four stars to five? The rest of the story, a part two!

BJ

What a load of nothing.

Very nice story. But why the uncertainty towards the end? It would have been nice if he would have suddenly found her waiting at the airport requesting him not to go. That uncertainty turned 5 stars into 4.

This is a good start though slightly confusing towards the end. Why the uncertainty in his mind? Hope the sequel is good enough to turn this 4 stars to 5