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Click here"She might." Jon scratched his chin. "I have felt that way a few times after watching Alysson beat up on some of the elders..."
"Jon!!!" She exclaimed and blushed. "I don't think that is something that Geoff needs to know about." She grabbed her husband's hand and pulled him back to their offices. "I have got to call Dan about this. I am sure he will get a great laugh out of it." As soon as she sat down she dialed his inside line.
When he answered there was a laugh in her voice. "Got a moment or two Dan? I just watched Mari at work disciplining a group of miscreants." Her smile was a mile wide and she kept snickering over it.
"Well I was in a meeting but we were almost done and I am sure Saul and Felanzi would get a good chuckle out of it. Go for it and tell us what she did." He really sounded interested and could use a good laugh.
"Well a bit of history, her assistant is a sweet girl but a bit slow and she was being picked on..." She proceeded to tell him entire story while her husband was sitting in a chair laughing as hard as he could.
When she was done there was a moment of silence on the other end before everyone started laughing. "That sounds like Mari. I think Geoff has been good for her and being at your house is letting her become the woman she can be. Thanks for the good laugh and you have a great day." They chatted for a moment or two longer before they both hung up.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 5 years agoThere really needs to be more to this story! It is wonderful (few misspellings, but still) just wonderful! I love the way she is becoming what she could have been had the old alpha not been abusive to begin with. You have a great story, wonderful characters and are great with the descriptions of the things happening around them. Please keep writing!!
JJMemaw
cittranover 10 years agoBut she's female, so...
*shrug*
Her ovaries grew three sizes that day?
maxd01over 10 years agoAuthorI can't say there were any particular scenes that I really loved since in a way it was so emotional. The scene at the very end where Mari yells at some kids who were picking on Gettie was enjoyable to write and the four of them might show up again.
I think what I liked the most was creating Gettie. I know some might not like the way I ended up writing her but I am trying to show people in all parts of life and from the highly intelligent to the idiots. (When I say idiots I am using the term for the ones that do stupid things like attempting to challenge Dan over something stupid or testing his rules. I am not talking simpletons.)
I feel Gettie balances Mari nicely and meshes well with the other characters. She isn't the smartest but she is dedicated and once trained to do something does it well. Her biggest issue is that she is easily upset and rather sensitive to what people are thinking. I hope others like her character as well.
maxd01over 10 years agoAuthorThere is actual lists at the end of some of the stories. Some of them are basic lists that are just names and what pack/clan they are with. Others have that as well as jobs, relationships and in some cases pronunciation of the names as well. If you started with the Geoff and Mari stories you actually started part way through the actual story. The Silver Moon - a change is the actual first story and this is a side story.
