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by EMiamiRiverRat
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Anonymousover 8 years agoI think there's a good emotion-filled story here...
...buried under some overly flowery writing and "fifty-cent" words. When the reader has to look up the meaning of every third word, the flow is lost. Oft times, the reader gives up long before the end of the story, as well. Just a thought...
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