by RedHairedandFriendly
This is the best sotry I have read on Literotica! It is so well put together that despite a few spelling errors I was 100% drawn into the story. Every aspect of the peice was so well balanced and there were no cheesy lines to distract. These are the two cops that I would love to have find me if I was in her situation! Great job!!!!
Your Story is exciting, well written, believable yet vivid!
your words paint an amazingly vivid erotic picture. You made me feel like I was there---Well done!
Excellent Red, just excellent. Very well written. You write as if the person reading your story is involved as well, if that makes any sense. A sequel? :)~
You just warmed up this cold morning for me. I'm hoping you share her next visit with us :-)
Definitely would like to see a sequel. You write very well, with good pacing, and steamy material. And who doesn't love men in (or out of) uniform?