All Comments on 'Sis Gets Ridden At Bike Week'

I liked the plot of the story, but it sounded like it could have used a little more finish work. There were many places that could have used a little more description and filling out. This could have been a multi-part story with very little effort.

Overall, nice effort.

I really really enjoyed this story. I thought it was very hott and I have to admit it got me going. I only have to say some grammar mistakes but a quick proofread could fix that. I sure hope there is a sequel coming. Great story Congrats!

Great story. I luv the comfortable relationship Jim & Chris developed in a short period of time.

story. And the previous one. And ALL your stories. Most are almost lyrical - and HOT.

Nice little story that got me hard and jerking off. Well written and nice flow. Your discription of your characters brought them to life for me. Thanks for supplying me with a fun jerk off session!

I love brother sister love. The story was well written and hot as hell. I gave it a 5.

very nice story saving the unnecesary details and direct to the point. keep on, its excellent.

Liked the story, the sex, the dialogue is a little stiff, perhaps you could use a few more contractions (I'm instead of I am etc) but otherwise cooking with gas!

This story made this old man cum! Of course their was help from my hand Loved it, 5 stars!