All Comments on 'Sissy Downfall'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
good story

Good story. I hope you will write more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

cannot wait for the next part.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

yes more pleasee

davinedavineover 10 years agoAuthor
Part 2

Hi Readers. Part 2 was available for a while until it was removed due to breaching a guideline. I hope to get the time to edit it and re post soon. Part 3 is already written but will also need editing to get it approved.

Davine.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Confusing word

In part one, the man is taken to his mistresses house where he sees his car parked in the eight stall garage. Entering he is led to his quarters where he opens a "robe" to see various lingerie hanging. I suppose the "robe" is a closet or cabinetry of sorts. I have never encountered the word "robe" used this way so I looked it up to see if the garment "robe" has other meanings and found none.

davinedavineover 10 years agoAuthor
Robe

Should have been wardrobe. Thanks for the comment.

awyldsideawyldsideabout 1 year ago

Didn’t see the need for all the blood related sex.

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