All Comments on 'Sister and Bhabhi at a Time Ch. 01'

About as exiting as reading the for sale adds in the newspaper

When you are a teenage boy, you fantasize fucking your sister. When you are in Middle age, (37 +) you fantasize your wife getting fucked by another.. It happens to all males. This story completes the fantasy. in4sum@gmail.com. Some couple needs to swing? In Ahmedabad? Contact us.

The story deviated from original premise.The reasons why the husband is withdrawn was abandoned and story jumped straight into a 3 some.Very unlikely.Try and make your story plausable.Otherwise ok.

Dear Vantyaak,

Or whatever your real name is. I am amazed at the passive attitude of the readers of this wonderful story. A writer writes on such a portal to gain appreciation apart of course from his or her desire to enjoy his or her own talent. However, is it not the duty of a good responsible reader to write a god comment, if he or she liked the story?

Well dear, for one, I am really impressed with your style and writing. I too write. However, I think you are a better writer. Very good reading your story. Smooth, flowing nicely and logically and sounding almost real. It could well be real, though I doubt. Kudos.

I could not resist the temptation of writing one more comment! Wow and how! You know how to ignite some one!