All Comments on 'Sister/Brother Always/Forever Ch. 02'

by AgentMichael

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Loved it!!! Next chapter plz

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
More!!!!!

Title says it all. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
5+

Wish to read more please....

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
wonderful....

Please continue...i need more !

CrimsonDrakeCrimsonDrakeover 9 years ago

more I cant get enough

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
more

This story has such a great storyline, can't wait for the next chapter.

arrowglassarrowglassover 9 years ago
AWESOME!

Maybe an overused word, but I really like where this story seems to be going! More please seconded!

ansdguyansdguyover 9 years ago
How is it...

That two highly unusual looking people, i.e.; black hair with silver shocks and purple eyes, don't recognize each other, knowing with whom their dates are with each other? They because they looked eye to eye during his performance at the gallery. He saw her purple eyes looking back at him. Then there's Clair, whom apparently thinks nothing of two people she knows with said striking and unusual looks. She clearly can't put 2 and 2 together. Now add Chris to that and this whole story doesn't hold up.

Please, If I'm missing something, let me know.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
A 'Neat" Story

This is a really 'neat' story and I hope there are

many more chapters to come.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

this is uniquely different. Quite enjoyable.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
More please!!!

Love this so far! Please hurry with the next chapter! :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
More please

Next chapter please!!!! Hurry thanks

curiousvisitorcuriousvisitorover 9 years ago
Please continue!!!

I quite liked your story, it is an interesting twist on the problem of incest.

Please, continue! A lot of people are waiting for this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
great!!!

Loved it can't wait for the next chapter!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
PLEASE CONTINUE

i come back every few months hoping he continues this

prop69prop69over 7 years ago
DO NOT STOP....

Will they be bro/sis? great fantasy

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

I get so tired of this you have a good story and just stop to many writers on this site do this so please finish the story.

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