All Comments on 'Sister Dials the Wrong Number Ch. 02'

A well written story. And headed in the direction that I was going to suggest.haha I enjoyed the length of both chapters, long enough that I could get into it and jack off. I think your sisters friend, and maybe her entire family, might eventually join the group. Sounds to me like a many chaptered story that will almost write it self.haha

The only complaint is that there isn't about 10 billion stories written by this great author!

Reading this short series has been a most enjoyable way to start the day.

Thanks for writing!

Please, whatever you do, continue this series. It is hotter than hot. Well written, there are a couple typos. Normally that disrupts my train of thought when reading a story but this one is so hot I read right through them.

definetly include mom and dad with the kids...and most definetly...some hot m/m & f/f bi action among them all participating together...

how about a pre-queal some thing that tell the stroie on how she got started with the mom and dad

The story is great so far, but the constant use of the third person by the sister gets a little old. It seems as tho you're emphasizing the fact that they're committing incest, which we sort of know at this time. I agree that we should find out the background about mom and dad.

Deliberate or Freudian slip? Otherwise, outstanding little series, so far.

Chapters since you gave us the tease about Mom and Dad. Its been fun so far. Don't stop now!

good but the endding ruined it a normal guy would have got up and left after she said he was bigger than dad and mom had a tasty pussy and started to look for a place to live and never talked to her again please stop rewriting human nature and keep it realistic and believable this isn't the twilight zone

Where's the rest of it

no guy would join her in the shower after she says she has had sex with the parents. it just proves she doesn't really love him and is just using him. he would more than likely go to his room and dress then leave avoiding her until he can find a new place to live. keep it somewhat realistic and believable or put it in the fantasy area you don't just shrug an admission like that aside easily he would need to do some serious thinking before touching her again.

DBRS

what a great story! I love the way you write, you have a great style. The sense of intimacy with the taboo twist is a great combo. I especially loved Ashley's sexy lingerie outfit and the high heels. Please keep writing, I can't wait to read another story of yours.

I'm surprised Ashley didn't call it off after you called her by that name.

good incest story-hot sex scenes-thanks