All Comments on 'Sister Dials the Wrong Number'

very hot - a nice idea to have her leave the voice message for brad!

the story has a nice flow to it... especially in the lead up... felt that it was a little rushed in the end.. but like the possibilities we are left with. good first story! keep it up.

Loved the story. Hope their is a sequel and hope her Ashley's friend shows up in it.

The story was excellent. It just felt right. A brother and sister fucking is such a turn-on. I got aroused and enjoyed the action. As some of the ohers have suggested, please let us see him fuck her some more and cum deep inside her wet pussy. Beautiful.

The story was excellent. It just felt right. A brother and sister fucking is such a turn-on. I got aroused and enjoyed the action. As some of the ohers have suggested, please let us see him fuck her some more and cum deep inside her wet pussy. Beautiful.

Very intensely realistic. A very well-written piece of erotica.

way to strange you expect us to believe that even though he is upset by the voice mail and ashamed of the way he feels and thinks about her that he would go to her room when she told him that it sounded better in person no way he would get dressed and leave the house for the day possibly a few days he would go out of his way to avoid her keep it atleast sounding somewhat realistic please

I know for a fact that if my sister had said what Ashley said, I would be spot on for the "view". There would be no hesitation... oh wait, that is probably due to the fact I've wanted to fuck my sister since I was 16 :P

Nice set up for them. Some parts were a bit difficult to read, but I liked it. 😃

Fun and quirky, but please find an editor. There are several volunteers on the site! Keep up the writing; it's hot.

Toodles!

AJ