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Letting out a moan, Gretchen gripped my cock firmly and started furiously jacking me with one hand and stroking at her clit with the other, the both of us on the precipice of orgasm.
She commenced to writhing, undulating beneath me as the first string of my ejaculate erupted from my cock, splashing her on the cheek and into her hair, I continued to spasm as spurt after spurt coated her stomach and breasts.
I leaned back, panting and watched as Gretchen lazily painted her stomach and breasts with my seed.
"That. Was. Awesome!" She proclaimed, grinning like the Cheshire Cat.
"Agreed, little sister. Let me clean you up."
I got up and grabbed a warm wet towel, wiped my still leaking shaft and went to her, cleaning her of my thick choad that coated her. I bent and lapped at her rubbery nipple; she giggled and slapped me away.
"Let's get dressed before mom and dad decide to check on us." I said, tossing her shirt to her.
The next morning, I woke up on the couch as I felt Gretchen rising, we had fallen asleep together.
"You kids looked so cute!" Mom said cheerily to Gretchen. "I didn't want to wake you."
Still lying prone on my couch, I feigned sleep.
"What did you kids do last night, did you eat?"
"Jack ate some fish." I nearly choked when I heard this.
"Fish? Jack doesn't like fish!"
"Well, mommy," Gretchen said as she and mom clomped up the stairs. "He must love mine, because he just gobbled it right up!"
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 4 years agoClit so big, looked like a penis, wtf man it was alright then I red that and it’s all I could think of also gingers are gross and you just made them worse now that they all have micro penises
Anonymousover 7 years agoLovely story, I would have rated it an additional star if it hadn't compared a clit to a penis so many times and omitted the fish joke at the end. Those were some unappealing moments, fun story otherwise.
ChasBalmost 9 years agoAgree about needing more development. Liked the listening through the vent bit - that would be kind of sexy for sibs to do together. Wonder how Gretchen knew about eating fish, though, being so innocent.
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoI thought the story up to this point was just fine. It had enough character buildup for me, and honestly I didnt need any expounding on the cats/dogs comment which was really just a one-off reference to normal family bullshit. Yeah, the jump in to the sex was a bit abrupt, she could have taken a bit longer in conversation to get there... But I'm REALLY happy the brother's character didn't turn out to be the typical whiny loser crap we typically see on here when the sister suggests sex of any kind. Thank you!! Looking forward to the next chapter... And loved the brother setting his buddy straight and that being the end of it without a bunch of antagonism bullshit! :)
searchingforperfectionalmost 10 years agoI agree with those who said there wasn't enough character development; but even more important, there wasn't any real build-up to the sex. Gretchen asks a question or two, then suddenly becomes aggressive.
Anonymousover 10 years agoPretty good. I liked it, however it lacked the finer details of character development and details as to how they are as a cat/dog brother sister relationship. You have potential and fuck what that anon prick said before. Once you get someone to help you edit your work amd bounce ideas youll be solid. Keep up the good work.
Anonymousabout 11 years agoThis was horrible. Really bored me. You need to edit too. Learn how to actually write a story.
