All Comments on 'Sister-In-Law Sylvia Ch. 02'

"As I was pouring the wine into her glass that she was hold. I spilled (or poured) some on her paints. Prefect landing, on her crouch."

Presumably "holding" and "crotch"?

"started to rub her crouch. At first she aloud me to clean the spill, than she " - again, presumably "crotch". And "allowed"?

Do you ever PROOF-READ?

Very nice and arousing. Please write more and expand on where they go next. I think Sylvia liked what she got and would like more.

Please get your stories edited or use a spell checker as poor spelling and grammar spoils the flow

Eleven years ago, and you haven't fixed it yet? Why is it still here? Your commenters have said it all.

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