All Comments on 'Sister Loves Marine Brother, A Lot'

I enjoyed reading this story. I hope you will continue writing this story & post another chapter soon. What happens next?

i'd like to read more...

Loved the slow build up to their love making in the end. Loved the twist in the end too ;). Look forward to reading a part 2!

The dialogue is very stilted. The progression of events seems unlikely. From practically ignoring his sister as he takes out the trash to indulging her jealous fantasies...not believable to me.

I liked it and hope I see more from you.

I love this, you are an amazing writer. I wish my cherry could get popped this way. Cant wait to read the rest of your work. Hotness!

Oh shit!

That was fucking awesome

That's big Marine brother James talking to his baby sister Jen, and you better believe this big bruiser means it. He's going to pop, bust, tear to shreds his little sister's cherry, and she's going to love it, just as she loves her brother's big stiff prick. James blows his brotherly balls up his kid sister's adorable little coochie, shooting her a great big twatful of his creamy semen. This is an excellent story of hot sisterhumping by a gifted writer who's 18 to 22 years of age, so maybe even a late teenager. I bet Mr. Poopydoo's young dick was hard when he wrote it and he shot a good healthy load at the end. He really digs the idea of a brother reaming out his sister's cute little twat and flooding it with the great big doses of potent sperm he's got waiting for his sis in his big balls. James ends up fucking a baby up his baby sis's cunt, a little souvenir of their hot incestuous fuck. Semper fi, sisterfucker.

Can James have some hair on that muscular chest? Several references to James without a shirt, or James threatening to take off his shirt for the blonde girls; let's give James a healthy dose of chest hair to really show the sexy side! And hairy pubes, too!

I enjoyed your story and will read the sequel. A little advice: when you've finished writing - read it from start to finish. You will pick up little inconsistencies and errors in grammar. You might also find things that felt right as you were writing but don't make sense - like when his little sister is giving him head, would he grab her face? I think you wanted him to grab the back of her head. Overall pretty good, though.

Gtreat start! I love stories where sis gets the big load and hangs onto it for 9 months. Loved the story!

I couldnt even read this cause the disrespect he is no marine if so he would have been taught respect which he had none to even write about it like this is a disrespect to everyone who serves or served you should be ashamed and quit writing