All Comments on 'Sister Mine Ch. 01'

is there more to come?

When does the next chapter show up? This is hot writing. I love the tentative treatment you apply between them. It makes it much more realistic.

Keep up the good work!!

Madengineer3

What happened to the the rest of the party people? They were sure to overhear! Where did you put them?

The best place for a brother's big hard cock is up his sister's tight little twat, as more and more of them are finding out every day. Young guys blowing their brotherly balls up their sister's cute little cunt is fast becoming mainstream, despite the concerns of a worried society and terrified parents. Up his sister's cunt is where a brother's sperm belongs.

Enjoyed the story, but would have preferred he had done more at the party. He was the chaperone. Some of her friends could have done more to make her jealous so she would ask Jack if he really thought she was sexy.. No mention of birth control pills. She just told Jack to fill her pussy. No mention of birth control after they fucked.

Could have been longer, but good while it lasted. CINCO ESTRELLAS!