by exfireman
I expected some answer to the Love comments. Make a commitment.
Both said they loved each other and called each other "My Love".
End this story and have them move in together and pledge their undying love.
Then start a new series.
Still a good series, we need some finish
hot chapter and they obviously love each other so hope.you'd keep them together...
...right now. Wishing I had a sister, like that, even a woman not my sister, that wanted to sleep sucking me...So Hot!
It's gross and unsanitary. You could get a very nasty infection that way. It took me out of the story. You write anal poorly anyway. Not realistically.