All Comments on 'Sisters'

never made it to the first time catagory it was put under the incest/taboo catagory

yeah this belongs in the incest/taboo cat, thats where it landed so its all good!: however! it seems authors these days, you included, like to squash the orgasm event into a sentence or 2... thats stupid, dont do it, if you have ever had GREAT sex (ok good sex works as well), the moment is alot more then "ramed it in, came, she came, done..." which is pretty much what you did... the last time i had GREAT (ok it was just good) sex, the end point while only lasing about 30 seconds could have been truthfully described only in a paragraph, and not a short one even........ other then that tiny part that killed it for me, great work! ~~~~~~ Anon1856

I submitted this story to be put in the FIRST TIME category, but apparently the editors at literotica saw fit to change it to INCEST/TABOO. I agree that it does fit that catgegory, but when writing it, I intended it as a FIRST TIME story. I still feel that the people most likely to appreciate the story would be more likely to read it in FIRST TIME.

TC 5

I wouldn't worry too much about the catagory. This story fits several different themes, all worthwhile. Your tag line should capture the attention of your primary audience. Don't sweat it, it's all good.

Max052

I loved the twins part. That was hilarious.