by scorpio00155
Good story line, hope to read the next chapter with more graphic details of how they look & etc...Keep up the good work...
I'v read a quite a bite of incest storties on this site. and yours is good enuff
to keep the storie line goning. I would shugest more spaceing you know smaller phrases.and maybe more dialogue between the characters. and it coud perty damm good.
p.s I write phonetically is't allso a good idea for your stories
signed your truly your fan
you ruined it at the begining no guy would put up with sisters like that when he went to his room he would have locked the door and not come out for any reason keep it believable
ok its official you are by far my favorite writer on the site! im loving ur stories so much!!!!!
Oh man! Great story!You need to write about what they teach him!