All Comments on 'Sister's Ex-Husband'

A good story. Mature in a sense. Jasmine was a good character, I really liked her personality or how you conveyed it when she was ten and speaking to Travis the first time they met.

Because I enjoyed this one very much...hot, yet romantic. Jasmine and Travis are a good match. You have a nice writing style and I like the way your story flowed so smoothly.

Where is the incest?

that was a very nice story. I enjoyed it a lot. But it should have been posted in 'romance' - not that I am complaining. Only thing that bothered me is the use of 'then' when it should have been 'than'. Sorry, but I am a stickler for such things. Great writing, though. I have enjoyed most of your other stories as well.

I really liked the story line,fiction or fact doesn't make any difference.Fucking your exwifes kid sister would be a huge turn on.Damn how sweet would it be.The story was well written and the characters seem to be real.Ann the slut sister,one who fucks around on her husband of only two years,should be taught a lessen.That could be another chapter,if the author has a need to write it.

Thanks for the good post

Rich

Don't mind the ones asking where's the incest. I think they forget that the actual category is Incest/Taboo. This story fits more under the Taboo side of that. It was a good story. Thanks very much.

Some of this doesn't make any sense. Her boyfriend cheats because he needs "real" sex, and don't care who knows about it. She's so torn up that she initiates sex with her ex brother-in-law with a huge penis. Right away he sticks his finger in her ass and she lets him. Can't you CHILDREN reading this see how stupid and contrived it is? Oh well, at least someone noticed it wasn't incest! Grow up!!

there much more left in this story! Please hurry! These to were meant for each other!

Doesn't matter where plced, it was a fucking fantastic story hope ther is more to this tale to come. Thanks will be watching for part two can't waite to read sisters reaction to upcoming marriage and the revelation of Jazz's knowledge of Ann fucking Todd. Who knows maybe after Ann see's the ex and Jazz happy she might want to make iit a happy 3some.

It might have been better place in First times, but can see incest listing, it is about close as you can get, next to being a step or foster sibling, or other relatives by marriage, but to me no blood ties no incest.

Love this story! Totally sweet and hot! Perfect! It should be under romance or first time though! Keep writing!

love the story but it feels like there should be more to it

I loved the story but I want to find out more about these two please continue. Keep up the good work!

It was a good story... Another lover from afar tale. It flowed well, not a lot of grammer errors in sound alike words.

Well developed characters through time. Loving and beautiful story. Ready for more !,,

Excellent insight!

A rushed ending, but good overall. 5.