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All Comments on 'Sisters, Friends, and Lovers Ch. 09'

by SteveWallace

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Really like how you've introduced work life into the story

So many stories just ignore work life you have introduced it with depth that makes it real. I really like the way you are developing the character of Jane. I am extremely find of how you have all four major characters care about each other. Looking forward to the rest of the series!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

A couple of times I got confused, had to re-read a paragraph, or series of conversations. The detail seems to have fallen over the last 2-3 chapters.

Rapier875Rapier87511 months ago

Excellent chapter !

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A note on the story Loosening Up: Yes, it has many many characters. A PDF is available upon request listing the characters and placing them in some kind of perspective for the reader. Just email me (see below). Well over 18 ... even 30, hell 40 is way back there, oh hell, o...