All Comments on 'Sisters, Friends, and Lovers Ch. 11'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Name issue

You called Ally Abby twice. A little thing, but Lyle started out the series as Kyle, which got confusing for a bit..

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A note on the story Loosening Up: Yes, it has many many characters. A PDF is available upon request listing the characters and placing them in some kind of perspective for the reader. Just email me (see below). Well over 18 ... even 30, hell 40 is way back there, oh hell, o...