by JANAMARIE
You have written another excellent erotic story. I enjoy your writing and look forward to each new story. This one is really great erotic writing. The only way you could have made this one better would have been to have the three of them get together in a polygamist marriage.
LutherT
This is a great Hot story! It certainly aroused me!
Great job!
Another great story. You have a very good way of expressing your sexual feelings in each of yor stories. Keep writing they certainly make me hard and I usually have to find someone to practice on after reading them.
Thanks,
Mike
she shows up and wants sex no getting to know each other just strangers no reason she came or why her sister came it sounds like you left out a few paragraphs you need to go back and rewrite this and fill in the holes god what idiots this site has for writers
DBRS
Great stories, most of them, but I really get all turned off with your violence about someone is going to cut off someone's dick in every story. I would drop that, major turn off. Considering people read these to get turned on, what is the point?
I absolutely detest Jim. Rich, good-looking and lucky as hell. LOL
I rated the story prematurely and bad been in a mood. If I could I would change it to 5. More if i could. Makes me want a secluded cabin and "fun" guests.