by Alex De Kok
Really, really, nice! Keep up the good work.
-- KK in Texas
Hi, I'm really impressed and would love to see more of this story!
Hey man, that was some tale. Well-written, well-paced, totally delicious. Congratulations on a tale well-told!
Almost every story you have here has a red H! Add this one to the long list. Loved it! Please continue the story.
Very fine erotic writing and people that we can like as the protagonists.
Wow you are a big surprise Alex..
From Gor to Romance .
You are a very talented Writer.
I look forward to more of your stories.
Please don't make me wait so long this time..
Thank You
Very impressive pacing and dialogue: I shall definitely be checking out more of your fiction, Alex. How about a story featuring Sally? Maybe she's so happy to get out of the way because she has plans of her own?
Once again you've come up with a cast that touches the heart and are DAMN HOT at the same time. As someone else commented, perhaps Sally could add to the mix here and then there's also dear old Mommy - oh, wait - this is Romance. Sorry about that, just got carried away a bit...... ;-)
Thank you for a lovely loverly story! He is mainly just a horn dog, happy to find a replacement fuck buddy, but she is a wonderful young woman, whom I hope he can deserve, so that she can teach him the nuances and permanency of love. Meanwhile, the sex is HOT DAMN!
Alex, Your are a terrific romance writer.
Nothing else needs saying - please, keep them coming!!!
I really like it when it is the female that takes the lead. He dreamed about it; she made it happen. The story line is similar to others of Alex's with nude swims, sexual attraction, blow job, eating, and then the main event with promise of more. But the characters are new, the situations are different, and that is what pulls me into the story. And, of course, all of the stories have a reasonable ending that doesn't have to be an ending. What is one to do - make up our own endings? One thing I'd like to know is about that discarded rubber (Wow, another good reason to read Alex's stories, to see rubber instead of condom. I really thought that the word "rubber" had disappeared from use.) Is it a custom in England to wrap the rubber in tissue and dispose of it in a trash can? Don't people just throw them in the toilet? At any rate I enjoyed the story and the sex. Thanks.
I want to see some marriage or pregnancy please, that would be sooo hot!
Also very wrong category. NOT a romance, just a fuck fest for now.
If this story is any indication, I think not.
Fun, but the dialogue is ridiculous. No one has coherent lengthy sentences in the middle of sex.