All Comments on 'Slash Fiction'

...now it needs another chapter! This was a good read. Hope you decide to continue it.

......this has to be the most stupid paragraph written here in a while.

""With all that baby-making juice?" Judy held me close and nodded. My regret was short-lived once I understood what she was feeling. "Here it comes!" I told her. I stopped trying to hold back. I blew my balls inside her beautiful pussy. I straightened my hips so my sperm would have a straight shot into her womb."

Baby-making juice! How stupid.

Much of that paragraph was lifted from a suggestion made in a comment on another story. That phrase was a shout-out to him.

To leave a comment! Like I said before, I'm really liking this! And as someone that reads an inhuman amount of fanfiction, lol, I relate to Judy's level of fandom involvement. So many of these stories I start out liking, only for them to fall apart on me. I hope this one doesn't.

Well, that escalated quickly.