All Comments on 'Slave to a Couple Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Good work

A vey good begin. I'm looking forward to the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Keep it up!

Definitely a great start - I hope you continue!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Very nice start to the story. I do hope you'll continue with it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
great story

great story can,t wait to read the rest of it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Great start

I enjoyed the first chapter very much. Hope you will continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Great start

Do continue you with it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Very good

Enjoyed it so far and looking forward to seeing more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Awesome Start

Would love to see more of this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Well Done

both sexy and well-written. I would have liked a full chapter of buildup to Doug and Susan's offer. I do hope we will have a good number of chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
GREAT.....

Loved it, cannot wait to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Great Story; Clean-up everywhere!!

I don't care what M & M said...

I'M TOUCHING MYSELF RIGHT NOW AND I JUST CAN'T STOP!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
great

please continue!

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