All Comments on 'Sleat Harbour'

you had me captivated and on the edge of my chair with this.it was wounderful.

The quality of the plot, character development and dialogue is excellent. What a sensual feast! The polar contrast of all the sensory elements combined with the story development and timing build a delicious erotic anticipation and tension that makes the climax unusually satisfying. Emotional, sensual and erotic, this is an inventive and marvelous work.

Gripping.

A new blood on the Literotica, and made self being heard.

That was GOLDEN, Goldie.

I don't usually respond to a Non-Human category story, but this was so vivid, with excellently drawn characters and other-wordly descriptions I quickly succumbed. My entries are completely different...The Mask (funny) and Who Killed Lois Laynes? (murder mystery...I believe currently in New section) Read them if you can! Good luck!

I absolutely loved this story. This is the type of story I love reading, it has everything. It may be in non human but it smacks of romance. It would be a shame if you didn't win. Good luck!

Didn't matter at all. Deftly crafted and a joy to read. Easilly deserving of all the Kudos. Congratulations.

-Colly

Very good story. I loved your use of the sensory elements. The colors, the smells, the light. I enjoyed reading it quite a lot.

Good luck.

This was a really exciting story and very sensual. It's not a stroke story like I usually read but what I would call a page turner even so.

You are, I think, first and foremost a story teller. I really enjoyed it. Please keep writing, I will keep reading.