All Comments on 'Sleep'

Well-written, beautiful, and sexy as all get-out. More, more, more!

How lovely! Erotic, sensual, well written-- I gave a big sigh when I'd finished reading this, made me feel all warm and slushy! Thank you Paper Venus, you've done my heart good today...

Wow!! Billybondage read this great piece of erotica with a massive erection--wishing I were the male in the story. Such attention to detail, such beautiful prose, all grammatically correct and, above all so descriptive, enough to raise the temperature of any nomal male. I just loved it. How about some more stories?

worse i have every read

Lovely story of a couple making love.

Miranda (Small & Cute)