All Comments on 'Sleepyhead'

great work i loved it. 5 stars. psl write some more.

4.3 40 yard dash women's world record is 4.6, come on

please more on this subject! all young daughters should be schooled by there parents111

'Fuck our baby, Jack' - I lost it. Great finish.

Not enough sex for 6 pages.

Please write a sequel to this story

I recall reading what seems to be the same story s day ago; here it is again with a blank rating tool. What gives?

Best story I have ever read here

Great story, love the daughter impregnation

is the luckiest husband-father there is! How I wish it had been me. 30 years ago my wife expressing much pleasure with our love-makng stated that she wished that when my step-daughter, then 12 yo, would be of age , she would like it to be me to bring her out being her first lover and teaching her to have it done right. Unfortunetly it didn't happened but it has always stayed in my memory!

Well the story was pretty interesting and fairly hot. Total fantasy land, of course, but fun none the less. The innocent, never even mastrubated before college daughter seduced mom and dad like a well practiced, very forward slut! No hymen, no pain either. I laughed when he was fucking her and eas hearing a 'slosh, slosh, slosh', I just kept thinking, this is a nine inch dick going into his tiny daughter, sounds like he's fucking a slutty drainage ditch, not his little girl, lol!

Inaccuracies aside, it was a hoot!

Wow.... what a story... well written and a great story line......made my dick hard.... hope to read more of your stories......