All Comments on 'Slip in the Shower Version 02'

And instead of cpr, she's sucking his dick.

1st one was awful and so is this one.

I am beginning to wonder if you've suffered head trauma after posting a second piece??? The first was horrible, this was worse. You have talent, stories, and the ratings to prove them, what happened? Having one bomb...okay, can happen to anyone, but to write a follow up after the reception the first received? I honestly wonder if your account has been compromised, nothing else makes sense. If you did indeed write these stories I hope you have the flu. The flu or something else that's temporarily causing you to post stories that in no way reflect your talent. Please do take care...if something needs attention in your life or fixing, then fix it. Myself and your other fans will understand and wait with open arms for your return. God Bless.

lets hope the rise in blood pressure for them doesnt cause in interbrain bleeding to become a fatal stroke(both stories was fucking retarded)

Keep writing. Fuck what they say they can easilly read something else.

Last time I told you not to reproduce. And wtf? You did.

Bring back the old Woody. This socks.

Seriously, 10"...bad idea to stroke that when his pulse was getting weak not but a minute earlier. And just a hint, even if it is fantasy, the average male penis is 5.14 inches erect.

I got some bad press for these four stories (I submitted them all at the same time). Firstly, I obviously should have posted in 'nonconsent/reluctance' - the general theme would probably have resonated with the guys over there. Secondly, I wrote these as a sort of experiment, to try to see (through writing) how similar the experience of sex is for girls and guys. So sorry you didn't like them, but I'm afraid these four were more for me than they were for you! Thanks

I think it's pretty nice. It's just a story, anyways. It wasn't the best remake of 1, but still pretty good.