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Jake moved, rolling to one side and nuzzling her tits, before licking his way to first the right and then the left. He rose from the table, shaking his head in amazement, before gathering his clothes and heading to the men's locker room. Kerry ran his fingers down Susie's body, pausing at her pussy and sliding a finger into the hot core. "We'll be doing this again," he said, before twirling the digit and leaving her alone in the room.
Susie rolled to her stomach and watched Kerry leave the room; he too gathered his clothes and she knew he was going to shower off the evidence of their mating. She ran her fingers down her body, cupped her come-soaked pussy and toyed with the slippery juices. "A shower sounds good," she whispered to herself and slipped from the table. Ignoring her clothes, she made her way to the men's locker room, to see if Jake and Kerry needed someone to wash their backs.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoYeah, let Mike stop by, and then like the Gattlin boys, let them fall ...One...by...One after he stops and locks the door. But this time She falls as well.
Anonymousabout 10 years agoI still get compliments on Red's awesome tale wherever else I have posted it, actually had a friend 'follow-up' with a few continuing adventures from her launch-point.
That said, many thanks again Red and an open invitation to any authors interested in penning an adventure for Susie.
michael_stcroix@yahoo.com
deathlynxabout 17 years agoOk, so it might not be the best for character development, but it's erotic and fun...And it has the potential as a lead off for a great series in which the four explore...
A lot of great fun!
KOLKOREabout 17 years agoWife is not a “whore” but sill there is not much of a ‘story’ here. Besides, there is the ‘minor’ problem of wasting many people’s time by wrongly categorizing it on both the ‘official’ category and in the author’s comment. It could be bothersome as you have to waste some time before you realize what type of story you are really reading. A context in which one spouse CONSENTS – either grudgingly or enthusiastically to the other spouse’s extra marital sexual relations, could not be cheating. You can not know and agree to your spouse cheating - it’s a contradiction in terms. Who is being CHEATED?
I’ll have to give credit to the smart way of inserting the consent, in a sort of background, unofficial frame story. Nevertheless, it’s in the mindset f the reader (see the effect in some of the comments).
My main problem though is that in my book you need little more, not much more but still a minimal benchmark which should be reached to call it a story. Even in a very short story It’s not enough to have characters in action because that would include a description of construction workers doing their work or for our business here a couple having sex. Invent some Problem, a conflict which you plant in the beginning put the characters together let them work on that problem/ conflict (they don’t even have to solve it!) and you got a story! I can not vouch for the quality of the story but it would be a story. And yes they can have a lot of sex as they work on their problem or as a way to solve their problem –use your imagination.
(BTW, I am very impressed by number of other submissions. Had to be then a decision to not create ‘a literotica’ – erotic story - but only a boring stroke scene).
jushornyabout 17 years agoYou wrote a hot scene as usual Red. I'd love to read about the shower next
Anonymousabout 17 years agoReally well done. Being told from the woman's POV made this story stand out from most. Nice job with a story idea from someone else.
Ignore the mouth-breathers trashing the concept of adultery on an erotic story website. Since they can't get the irony, and ignore your disclaimer, they are useless.
Anonymousabout 17 years agois always a good thing. And I can imagine hubby dropping by the job and having a good time himself, maybe a sequel?
