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Click hereI took Cassie in my arms and kissed her. "Thank you, thank you for being so understanding."
I felt an arm around me and turned to find Celia with tears streaming down her face. "I love you Daddy, I love you Cassie. I'm sorry for believing the lies that Mum told about you. You are a good man, the two of you are good people and I know that we can do this."
I remembered then the thought that crossed my mind as I left the clinic; 'The train I was on wasn't going to oblivion, it was going in the opposite direction.'
- COMMENTS
MoMiner64Meteover 4 years agoI really enjoyed this story and would love to see more on these characters. I think that the story is loudly begging for a follow on story to show their further activities. I also felt a great amount of empathy for the ex-wife and would like to see that she recovered from her drug problems and resumed a productive, drug free life. It is difficult for me to believe that any self respecting guy could completely trash the woman who is the mother of his children and wouldn't want to give her some sort of help to return her to good health and well being. That is just common human decency.
Finally, I’m absolutely amazed that there are only three others who have decided to leave comments on such a good story.
Anonymousover 7 years agoand direction with them both using their talents to start a new venture....can never understand why people when divorcing find it necessary to destroy one or the other instead of just letting go...been there...done that...got the T shirt.....at least he is not callous enough to not try to help his ex.....
Yuri5almost 8 years agoI really like your stories; they're pretty complex compared to most Loving Wives stories - and most of yours appear to be in the Erotic or Romance genres, which is pretty astounding, so I'm going to have to read a lot more of this now :)
Anonymousalmost 16 years agoFirst, kudos for your writing. I have a couple of comments that may help you in the future. You did not give a description of the lead male so when he saw Cassie I could not know if she were older, younger or similar age. Also, the statement that he had a magnificent body came out of the blue, what did he do to get/keep it or was it a joke?
During some of the dialog I couldn't tell who was speaking, the changes were not clear. Also, I could not make heads nor tails of this paragraph: "She wasn't entitled to steal from me the cards that she had given me from before we were married, and that I wanted to keep as precious memories of the good part of our life together. That hurt, just as much, if not more, than the separation." Finally, I thought that you overdid the ending. Now, the ex is broke, dumped, drugged and committed. Up to this point, he was living the revenge of living well. This addition actually, to me, distracted from their story. I thought that you did an excellent job of dialog, especially during their first break together. Thanks again, TTom
