All Comments on 'Slowly but Surely Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Good story

But I knew Klein was a baddie as soon as you mentioned that he wore a black hat!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
nice work

The story is good, most definitely. [For the record, and considering the time/setting of the storyline, a gunshot to the hand is (in addition to being remarkably accurate for being as described) a wound which would render the hand only marginally useful for the rest of the man's life.] But I am certainly looking forward to the next chapter.

-- KK in Texas

DG HearDG Hearover 15 years ago
Good Story!

Keep it coming Jake.

DG

DesertPirateDesertPirateover 15 years ago
Nice

This is comming along nicely. I am enjoying the story and look forward to the rest.

Storm113Storm113over 10 years ago
nuch better pace

much better on this one. just the right amount going on with this story length.

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