All Comments on 'Slowly but Surely Ch. 03'

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LilacQueen15LilacQueen15about 4 years ago

Oops! Roxie got caught.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Great tale

Lookin forward to Ch 4.

bruce22bruce22over 15 years ago
Very Good Story

Nicely structured. For a while there it appeared that we would have a simple romantic story. Now the plot thickened

and the whys and hows will have to be dug out of the woodwork.

DesertPirateDesertPirateover 15 years ago
Just plain good!

This is a fun story and well written. Reminds me of a bit of Grey or L'Amour. Really looking forward to the rest.

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