by fantasy69
These stories were really good, but they have now left the meaning of the story and the category, it's a shame
Do not listen to anyone this is a great story and series
and this story has a very great point it was a great emotinal climax. I think u need to get to back to tommy though. Take your time with the story. YOU ARE A GREAT WRITER
thank you for updating them so quickly
Bravo Sir! A sound conclusion to the Frank storyline and a wonderful expansion of Kate's Slutty tendencies.
It was great to see Frank get a slap! And the story was very Hot. I think I'd like to see Liz again.
But I think it would be a good Idea to focus on Kate and Tommy exclusively in the next chapter (with maybe a little bit of Kristy), just as a kind of cleansing of the palette. Your choice of course, but I offer the suggestion at any rate.
Thanks too for updating so quickly. I look forward to chapter ten, or should I say X, or indeed XXX. Thanks Man! Keep up the good work.
Oh, thank you SO much for the new chapter!
it was so great to see a new chapter so soon and espesially such a well writen chapter! It was surely very hot and nice and added many new possibilities for the upcoming chapters.. It was so inspired and the twists surprises us all! Im sure that our lovely Kate will want to thank the big guy.....!! Please give us more soon very soon if you can...
AND again a BIG thank you for yuor great writing which you share with us. I cant wait..
Oh, thank you SO much for the new chapter!
it was so great to see a new chapter so soon and espesially such a well writen chapter! It was surely very hot and nice and added many new possibilities for the upcoming chapters.. It was so inspired and the twists surprises us all! Im sure that our lovely Kate will want to thank the big guy.....!! Please give us more soon very soon if you can...
AND again a BIG thank you for yuor great writing which you share with us. I cant wait..
This is absolutely the best series in the whole of literotica, it combines uncontrollable lust, attempts at self control, an acute inner voice, and LOADS OF MOJO!!! Truly, I eagerly check your profile for updates whenever I come here, Kate's exploits just get better and better. Mucho credit to you for the great work, it rocks my world man.
Been a little while now so I thought I'd be the first to jump in with the inevitable, "Can we have another chapter now please", post.
So, quick as you can. Thank you!
Outstanding! Not much more you could say about it. Except maybe MORE PLEASE!
it has been so long since yuo posted ch9, so please could you post the new one any time soon?
I and many others check your stories every day to see the new chapter so please give it to us soon..
thank you
When do you think the next chapter will be ready? Been checking the site often to see it and was wondering if you were nearing completion?
Anxious for more. Tell us you haven't abandoned this wonderful tale. I'm growing concerned.
Really, does anyone know when or IF the next chapter will be posted?? I ve been checking the stories very often and I am alittle worried that maybe there will not be a new part..........................................
If anyone knows something, please say it!!!
i hope Adam comes back so she can repay him for saving her from Frank and his stooges
Frank got what the fuck he deserved he should have killed the little prick
I was so hopin frank got his come-uppance. I just wish he would have really got his ass beat. good writing.
This was the worst story. It was awful. It wasn't erotic, wasn't sexy. It was BAD!
Why have you ruined this story with Frank and this stupid side bar??? Ridiculous...
woman's lingerie (women’s)
tiny mini skirt (mini-skirt ) (ALL MINI-SKIRTS ARE TINY, THEY ARE, AFTER ALL, MINIS!!!!)
go ahead (go-ahead)
Than (Then)
than (then) (6)
sales girl (salesgirl) (2)
site of my pussy (sight)
rear view (rear-view) (2)
I succeeded (in doing) was to dislodge
turned a few turns (YOU DID NOT TURN A FEW STRAIGHTS????) (POORLY EXPRESSED!!!!)
HARD nipples and squeezed them HARD
ass hole (asshole)
god (God) (25)
water fall (waterfall)
loosing him (losing) (3)
tea shirt (T-shirt)
see-thru (see-through)
without (-a) (the) courtesy
loose my balance (lose)
mare inches (mere)
to whoever (whomever)
unmistakable stared men gave me (stare)
then the last (than)
I wasn't even there (weren’t)
up tight (uptight)
quite (quiet)
looked form face to face (from)
What ever (Whatever)
followed suite (suit)
Cuming (cumming)
Cumming (cumming)
CUMING...CUMMING
spread eagle (spreadeagled)
gentle giants face (giant’s)
laying on the floor (lying)
kick you fucking ass (your)
Early chapters of this story very good but sinking lower & lower & frankly going to stop wasting my time. More and More non-consent and no seduction like earlier. Worse yet so outlandish as be unworthy of reader's time
It's kinda funny. She hates Frank, and he's written as a complete douche bag, but he is almost exactly the same as Tommy, the son she is in love with. Tommy orders her about and uses her, and offers her to others, just like Frank. If you want the reader to hate Frank, then it stands to reason that the reader must hate Tommy too.
She calls her hubby a jerk for lusting after a teen girl, yet she has fucked that same girl, and her son, among many others. Her character is all over the place.
As a submissive myself; i completely understand the difference between Frank and Tommy: it s called trust and love.
I can submit to a man or woman that i trust; force me to submit? That will never work; i ll rebel and fight you to the bitter end. D/S relationships live and die on the trust they share in one another: they trust i ll be a good sub; that i ll obey them, and won t go to another master or mistress when they re not with me; i trust my doms to care for me and protect me; i trust that they don t break my limits, but push them back Tommy does that; deep down she knows: her son loves her, he likes to dominate her, but he isnt mean; not really. Frank though blackmailed her. It s not domination: it s forced and nonconsensual
Love it keep them coming I wish I could find a club like that I would love to have my pussy eaten while I was doing the same to another woman.
I really loved the way Frank was treated he deserved it after all, great story thank you!!!