All Comments on 'Smithson Ch. 01: The Forge'

Well done. Is a sequel in the works?

Like it sequel plz

I like it, please do not delay the next installment

Kind of like the lack of comment about his hair. One way or the other. Lets the reader assume whatever they wish xD

I don't really know what to make of this but, it is a really beautiful story. I sense however that you made this as a stand alone story right?

I'll probably continue this story. Though it will be moving deeper into the fantastic. Nothing to crazy. Think more the Conan movies and less LotR. Thanks for all the kind words commenters.

Interested in finding out more about Esa and her family.

very good read, would love to see more written. I hope you don't stop in the start or middle like some authors do. I will be watching for more posts by you

Edit .... Edit ? What do you mean edit ? edit what ?

I can't imagine changing a thing, wonderful job !

Yeah, you need an editor's help ( taut, not taught for example) and some considerable technical help with the blacksmithing part....

But it's a splendid and lush story! Don't stop!