All Comments on 'Smoke Ch. 05'

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BigJohn601 over 12 years ago

This story is really beginning to pick up steam.....

Great start to what is becoming a very entertaining series. Just what is it with chocolate kisses? You had Martine burning them in the firepit. You got a unrequitted sweet tooth Sophia? Love the nostalgic trip down memory lane complete with Superman comercials. Keep them coming.

2275jr over 12 years ago

A very erotic story written by a very erotic woman

love the story every bit as much as the very cleaver writing. but now there needs to be a new start to another of your brilliant stories . all i have read have been winners .

i would love to be your story ideas man. with all that a very clever woman that you are. doing all the writings.?

Anonymousover 12 years ago

one of the best authors at Lit

This story is getting good, can't wait to see where it goes.

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