All Comments on 'Smooth as Silk Ch. 02'

by SweetLittleLiar

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Top_FloorTop_Floorabout 1 year ago

It has some of the elements of a great story but it's too skin and bones, it's too thin.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Great for a brainless quicky

Sorry I have been reading on this site for over a year now and this one I don't really like.

I feels more like a soap opera porn then an erotic storie.

whybbadwhybbadover 15 years ago
Birthday presents.........

I love the idea of you being tied up in the scenerio.

You have such a naughty imagination.

-G

PS. My birthday is coming up.

Scotsman69Scotsman69over 15 years ago
a delicious tale Liar

Quite exquisite. Off to read the rest of yours now. You are a seriously good writer.

R_PetersonR_Petersonabout 17 years ago
Man’s favorite fantasy

Nicely written. Delicate. Soft. Sensuous. I can hear your fans asking for much, much more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
wonder when I'll see part 3

love your mind, love your detail, loved sherry, but really love you, keep writing sweet, i'll keep reading

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
very hot

loved it

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