All Comments on 'Snap Shot'

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please let me know where your book is posted/available

mr.danbarry@gmail.com

I really enjoyed reading this story. I could envision the setting and the sexually tension the photographer was going through and found myself feeling the excitement the you photographer was feeling. Great work. I hope it's true and someone was reacquainted with the girl of their dreams.

If the offer of "the" photo is still available after sixteen plus years I would love to see it. Please send it to tafleming@gmail.com

The way this story is told is so unique. The mood and environment is awsome. And i would definitely like to see a copy of that snapshot if it really exists.

Please mail it to me if you can.

Notsokewlguy@gmail.com

Love your story! Definitely a 5 star rating! Perfect girl next door story, as I have a few great memories of a couple, myself. Would love to see the pic! strandedauto@gmail.com

Thank you from the depths of my heart. You wrote such a warm, romantic, totally moving and enjoyable story that I could feel their movements, their emotions as I read.

Would love a copy of the photo sent to gilestompkins@gmail.com.

Thanks again, Giles.

I found this so erotic, i got aroused as you describe your photo's I could almost see the pics in my own mind.

Absolutely loved your story! Would love to see the photo! (jws1 [at] hotmail [dot] co.uk) Thank you!

Simply the best story I've ever read on Literotica and the only one I've ever taken the time to comment on. Very moving, tasteful, erotic and well written. Enjoyed this immensely. Thanks to the author.

Absolutely loved your story! Would love to see the photo! (lapsap66 [at] gmail [dot] com) Thank you!

The picture was just as you described it, thanks again for the patience to send it.

asweetdick.

The story was mesmerizing; the perfect blend of innocence and sensuality.

Yes i want to see the snapshot, but I already have. You have painted such a vivid image I have gone back to a time long ago when I was learning about love.

Thank you for the story but thank you more for the emotions that have stirred my memories to foreground.

Thank you for a great story ( reminisce ) . The characters came alive, excellent.

Truly wonderful, giving the reader a picture of your experience.

Top notch writing!

Thank you for sharing the experience.

And the photograph, to asweetdick@aol.com

One of the best stories I have ever read. Wonder why you have not written more stories.

Great storytelling. Takes back to those innocent days of fucking when porn wasn't as accessible.

A beautifully sensual story, unique in itself yet gve me flutters of remembrance of my own lazy summer days spent with lovers.

The best of writing I've read on this site. I would love to see such a photograph, but through my own lens and experience. Your snap should be yours alone. Bravo!

Absolutely love this story! As an adult/erotic photo model I can definitely relate.

Thanks!!

Wonderful sexy erotic story!

I usually don't bother commenting on stories written years back. However, this was an unbelievably well written story. Damn shame that there are no other contributions from this person.

I hope you are writing professionally. I can picture this story being an episode of RED SHOE DIARIES. I can even see the closing shot of the photographers hands holding that final remaining picture.

Does the photo really exist? It does, in MY mind, if no where else.

Thank you

Quality. Pure quality. Thank you!

M. Millswan,

This is the 3rd time I've read this story and each time I've read it, I marvel at the intimate intensity of the imagery your words evoke and the fiery HEAT of passion they bring about! I don't know what you do in your "real" life but writing should be a part of it.

This, sir, is a masterpiece! Cynth would be beyond proud of you.

Xavier

I really enjoyed this story, thanks for sharing...

so descriptive and full of life. love this.

You have painted a wonderful word picture for us. You story is especially meaningful to me since I graduated in 1965. Those were innocent days and you were able to live them to the fullest. Not only are you a master photographer but you are a word smith as well! Thank You for sharing and I would love to see the photograph.

What a beautiful story. I don't want to see the photo - I just want to imagine it as the picture you painted.

A brilliant read that made you want to be a fly on the wall then that age old saying "wish you was here" comes to mind soooooooo enjoyed this read deff my fav , thank you

You have captured the essence of the era, the age, and the profession in five pages of wonderful erotica. Even as he was capturing her essence on film, so you have captured the essence of boudoir photography.

Thank you for drifting me down memory's lane to when I took my first glamour photos and discovered that I had just enough talent to make very pleasing photos, but not enough talent to go professional.

Please keep writing, although you may have hit the pinnacle of your presentations in this one story. You write, I'll keep reading.

A masterpiece in shades and hues, vibrant as any oil or watercolor art. BRAVO

What an absolutely amazing story, one of the best I've read on this site.

I'm not as old to be a character in the years that this story is set but only about 10 years away and gosh it takes me back. If only I had someone as utterly beautiful to snap away at with my 35mm film! I would certainly have kept them, and/or the negatives and what a great memory to look back on if this is based on a true story.

If you really are willing to share that photo that really would make a great addition to the story. Please keep up the writing!

Praises for this story! So well written, hot and sensuous, capturing the joy of sex as a youth and the innocence of the encounter. Of course if you are really offering a picture I'd love to see it but would be a bit afraid that it won't live up to the picture you painted. Thanks!

I've read a lot of stories here. A very few equal this one for strength of voice, lyrical quality, and power to evoke the sensations of young love and discovery. None that I've yet found exceed it.

Thank you, thank you for sharing this.

l would love to take a peek at that snapshot

great-I'm emulating your narrative style in describing my day. This has helped me a lot about my actions, results, frustrations, and interactions with my wife of 44 years. Thank you-you're a writer!

robbed superlatives of their value.

This story is a superlative one.

I'm confident you must be a professional storyteller who posted this a decade ago in hope of reaching an old friend.

I hope it worked.

Thanks.

(As an amateur photographer who gave up portraiture when I got married, I'm very eager to see the surviving pic, if the offer is still open....)

Find her, She may need you. It will soon be too late so don't wait. You love her and always have. Memories are great but the real thing is much much better.

very sweet story ! It was sexual but much more than that ... something to remember

Amazing is really the one word needed to describe your story. This story should be in a category of its own. I can't believe I stumbled upon this story mixed among so much garbage. Thank you for sharing your snap shot memory.

I know when I am in the presence of a master storyteller. My only sorrow is that this is your only story here. If you are serious about the photo, could I please see it?

This story is so well written I could swear it was taken from a book.

The blend of youth and innocence and hidden lust really builds the essence of the story. The melancholy ending brings a bittersweet tone to the story that somehow makes this all the better, this is by far the best writen lit erotica story I have seen and I hope to find more!

A good day to you my dear chap,

A friend

I am traveling through Provence on vacation and decided to read your story while taking a break. Your well crafted words, the slow deliberate pace and the beautiful images of lustful youth held me entranced. I couldn't stop reading and I told the tour leader to continue on with his group and I would catch up layer. Your wonderful story on a lovely day in the lush French countryside have been the highlight of this trip. Thank you for that and thank you for your story.

Love the way you describe every important detail, not too much and not too short. And of course a very hot mix of naughtiness and a tiny little bit of a romantic atmosphere. Very well written.

Can you please also send me the pictures?

-> klonko-buck@web.de

excellent memoir about the source of passion. i would love to see the pictures if you would not mind. jaco.venter19@gmail.com. thank you

Can you send the photo to me? Email mkhll129z@gmail.com

Loved the slow excitement of both as she slowly reveals herself. She is as excited as he is, if not more so, and that makes the eroticism greater. Well written.

thank you for advance

phograph@free.fr

This is one of the most electrifying stories I've ever read. I'm sure that the pictures were memorable but the shared adventure of the shoot, with a "first love", is very exhilarating. Thanks for the sharing.

The long slow build up of anticipation was as agonizing as it was erotic. In my minds eye I could see the images woven so clearly. I'm still torn, was this skillful fiction or memories of true life? Part of me wants to know another doesn't want to break the illusion.

of the writer is captured in words and phrases, like the light in the clouds just after sunset for a landscape tog's shutter release.

I don't think I have read a submission as many times as I have read this one. I cannot applaud you on this, as it will sound empty and disappear amiss the crowd's cheer.

But I will give you a gentleman's approving nod on a priceless art piece.

volenti.non@gmail.com

Thank you for one of the most beautiful stories I have ever read. The pictures you painted with your words were spectacular. I can't imagine how many thousands of requests you must have had for the picture.

georgesand44@yahoo.it

please

A favourite

i concur.

truly well written,

a lovely classic work that is so deserving

thank you

now where do I go to vote.....

One of the best stories I have ever read on this site I hope you write more and I would love to see the picture of your Cynthia my email is mattdedman@aol.com please keep wroting

What an amazing, sensual and erotic essay. You should really have continued writing with your eye, a sensitivity and excitement for your subject and how moving it was to the reader. One of the best stories I have read here in years. I was totally mesmerized by your creativity and beauty in your description. It was so real and exciting. It left me breathless.. Thank you for sharing your talent. Maybe adding a picture would add to the reality of this tale.

joshi213421@gmail.com

justincasethesecond@gmail.com

coolguyrealcool24@gmail.com

I'd love to see it! pauline.yu77@yahoo.ca

I've read this two or three times now, it gets better every time. It's just as though you're there, the descriptions you write allows you to feel the tension, to almost feel Cynth as he felt her. The constant reference to her smile somehow makes her seem so sweet, whilst also being so hot and sexy at the same time. I liked the way you built up the tension in such a slow and deliberate way, it made the 'climax' that much more explosive when it happened. The only way I feel the story might have been improved would have been had the two of them spent the night together before her wedding, or if the marriage had failed and she made tearful return to 'the boy next door' who would have undoubtedly received her with open arms.

But nothing can detract from the story you wrote. It was worth a dozen stars, let alone the 5 stars I have given it.

So thanks for a great story !

would love to see that pic recoetzee99@gmail.com

Nice build up.

Loved the story. Would love to see the photo. Pl. send it to jit10025@yahoo.com

Amazing Read. New to this site. This is hands down the best story I have read yet. Would love to see the pic. Could you please send it to deckthis@gmail.com

I'd love to see that photo?(:

addict2317@yahoo.com

this would make a wonderful movie! Please send a snap shot to aceydeucie@yahoo.com

Thanks for reminding me why I love being a photographer!

Very nicely told. Sure sounds real. If so, it would be interesting to see if the reality equaled the image in my brain. :)

Incredible. I'd love to see the shot. Could you send it to kfb5926@hotmail.com

Can I please see those snapshots?

Deadly111@hotmail.com

Fantastic story, loved how you built up to the conclusion. would love to see the snap shot of "Cynthia" if you would be so kind as to email it to me.

Amazing story

The story is simply incredible.. Being a photographer I lived the moments.. Really fantastic....

I desperately want to see....

shraddha.sh143@gmail.com

What a beautiful story! would love to see the snap shot soccerpro321123@aol.com

I would love to see the picture of her. In my head it sounds beautiful.

cheetahreader@outlook.com

Thank you so much!

Moving, sensitive, erotic without sliding into pornography. It was beautifully told!

I've never been very in to erotic fiction because I find it too hasty and crude but this was simply stunning. Your words truly captured passion. I would be honored to see the image of this beautiful woman. Please send to back-arching@yahoo.com

A really well told and beautiful story. I would love to see the photo, please send to: iaxs@yahoo.com

If the time is right for both of you - I hope you get back together.

Best wishes for future.

Love this story. Very well written and very believable.

I would love to see this beautiful picture. rcullen5533@gmail.com.

Thanks and write more!

This was such an enjoyable read. The first two and a half pages built up the tension so well. I'm truly impressed by the quality of this. Also, like many others, I'd love to see the picture and compare it to the image I have in my mind. Email is ianmcw13@gmail.com

Very well told. I'd love to see the picture, too. gnomercy@gmail.com

This makes me revisit all of my younger years and first encounters with women. I love it. So well written and easy to imagine in my head. I'd love to see the picture too. george.maxwell.c@gmail.com

Such a charged passionate story, really good.

Love to see the pic

markthelegend@gmail.com

Love love love this.. Best I've read on here..

I'd love to see that pic as well.. Thanks..

dharklionz@rocketmail.com

I'd like to see the picture

chuckarancher@gmail.com

I would like to see the picture neatdog@hotmail.co.uk

Seriously, this is such an amazing story. You can feel the passion oozing out of every sentence. I always enjoy coming back to this one.

I'd love to see that picture.

saitchmaster@gmail.com

Your soul as an artist shines brightly through this story. Would love to see her picture. Mcalevy@ gmail.com

I had a similar experience with my first though excluding the camera and it is still fixed in my mind as if it were yesterday.

Please send the pic to colum6bus@hotmail.com

Ashley

Brought back some great memories of past encounters that seemed to mean so much at the time and still do now. Would love to see the pic.

Sensual & equally heart-warming story.. would love to see Cynth

E-mail : varunnagpal91@gmail.com

I'd love to see her! Will you share it with me? This was such a good story.

alancwise@me.com

i remember summer loves like that as a teenager. it really touched base but i would love to see her scd65@hotmail.com

very good story would love to see the picture my email is clouds.tgod@gmail.com

The best story I've ever read!!

This was perhaps the most romantic and sensual story I have ever read It actually made me cry! The way you captured Cynthia is absolutely astounding, giving flesh and depth to the story. Making the characters more important than the sex itself made it all the more intimate. Bravo!

Any man with a mind and eyes would love to see that shot. Your a lucky guy not everyone has a woman be patient and teach him the art of pleasing a woman. I wash I had that so young but better later than never

This is an amazing story, very well written! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.

I would certainly appreciate seeing that picture. My email is ziamitchell@gmail.com

Again, well done!

I would love to see the pic that inspired it.

myjunkforme at yahoo dot com

Cheers and Regards

Great story!!!! One of my all time favorites. Almost wish it were novel length for more reading pleasure.

Notice many have been asking for a copy of the photo (you sneaky rascal). Well, go ahead and send me a copy. (Don't tell me that the story is not true.)

Very nice story. Very .vivid.

Send me picture please @ dirtyjoke800@gmail.com