All Comments on 'Snap Shot'

Great story. Easily one of the best I've ever read. Would absolutely love to see the snapshot.

jorge.boricua@yahoo.com

Thank you.

Would love to see your pic of Cynth

Please send to wallace_wal@hotmail.com

Thank you

Wal

You write very well and communicated a moving story with intense sexual feelings. This is my e-mail if you'd please send me the cherished snap shot.

captaingrim@hotmail.com

Great story. Could you send the pic to walkingtall3232@yahoo.om. Thanks

Nice story. Send me the pic at franzcris_fjc@yahoo.com

I'd love to see it. Willmcdonald1982@gmail.com. May I have a look?

Great story. Well written and from the heart. I felt myself overlooking the actual sex which occurred, being more enthralled with your emotions. If you're willing to share that pic, I'd love to see. Younghungny@aol.com (Had to pull out the cheesy email for such a picture). Thanks for the great read!

Great story! Love the details.

Everybody must read rhis epic story :)

what a story man

please post that pic @ shivsbond007@gmail.com

TANK YOU FOR SHARING, THANK YOU FOR BRINGING US INTO YOUR WORLD AND LET US SEE AND FEEL ONE THE MOST BEAUTIFUL MOMENTS. I WOULD BE HONORED TO SEE THE PHOTO IF AT ALL POSSIBLE. THANK YOU, THANK YOU AGAIN. FARMERCOMP@YAHOO.COM

The most beautiful thing I have ever read.

Great word pictures! I can see it all happening in my mind. I, too, would like to see the picture. I never got to develop any of that kind in my darkroom days in the 70s and 80s. mailman2k04@yahoo.com

I am speechless. What an amazing read. Truly exquisite. I would love to see the photograph behind it as well. nicolella2006@hotmail.com

Absolutely fell in love with the story, such vivid details and the sneaking out of the bedroom scenario particularly strikes close to home. Would love to see what "Cynthia" looked like! cbrown54@student.fitchburgstate.edu

well told. you really pulled me in. thank you.

if you are willing to share I would love to see the photo.

tdjudd@gmail.com

@chandler_brwn@yahoo.com

A very wonderfully written story :)! I would love to see how she looks like as well. Please send to automatisch21@yahoo.com

I loved the story. How you explained it. It had every sensory detail. It felt like I was there. I would like to see what cynthia looks like. d01270904@gmail.com

I can see why this story is top of the list for exhibitionist tales, it's an amazing story. Your writing is clear, concise and deliciously descriptive. The story is beautifully paced too, rising to peaks before that glorious crescendo, the panic of Mum's return and the poignant coda. And of course I'd like to see see the picture, please!

This story reminded me of my first time. Just as sensual and vivid. I want to compare Cynthia to how she looks in my head cbgizmo1@gmail.com.

I like the others posting here loved the story. Extremely intense, almost chair gripping in the description(s), you can virtually feel the scene as it plays out. Would love to read more from you. Please keep up the great work.

He has published a lot of books under the same name as this story as well as non 18+

under Michael Swanson.

Look here:

http://www.amazon.com/M.-Millswan/e/B001JS223K/ref=ntt_athr_dp_pel_pop_1

as well as here:

http://www.farlightpress.com/about.html

Where you can see the picture of Cynth that inspired the story!

He is one hell of a talented writer and be sure to check out Sally Swanson too for some SF novels.

This is so well written that it makes me want to read more from you. Fine, sensual, seductive writing that brings the characters to life with enough reality to make one easily suspend disbelief. I am likely to never forget this story.

Could we got more masterpieces from you? Please !!!!!!!

My memory of my first experience is just as vivid. I hope it never fades. You are a skilled story teller. Thank you for telling it!

I did give her a photo 20years later with a copy of my reflections in a diary.

I would love to see a photo sunofjohn@hotmail.com

Sun

I loved the story. Id like to compared the actual cynthia to the image in my head. Pyroguy04@gmail.com

i would love to see the pics abcdvjc@hotmail.com

id you ever hear from her? has she ever seen this story?

you have a fine way of writing that makes the explanation of fine details effortless. i loved this memory you have shared with us, beautiful. sorry to hear about the fire in your studio. i would love that snapshot if you would share it with me. iamaman1190@yahoo.com

best regards

pete

If your photos are equal to the quality of your writing, you must br an excetional photographer.

Would love to see the one of Cynthia.

edandmarie@live.com

Thanks,

Ed

A very good story a decent background but u should have introduced more passion in early stage from the girl that would have been wonderful

Excellent story, beautifully written

Brought back memories of our first photographic session in 1986 and we are still together 26 years later

We would LOVE to see Cynthia's photo, please send to jennyphil@aol.com

Thanks

Jenny & Phil

You are an artist, both in literature and if I ever see this picture, I am sure in photo also. Very well written, smooth and beautiful. Its art and erotica. You are an inspiration.

I believe that I also can see the Snap Shot.

Speechless.

Bravo mate

Amazing! The classic girl-next door story writ large–and long, and with 128 nuanced shades of gray. Exquisite detail. Realistic dialog. Although we know the outcome from the first sentence, you make the journey a thing of joy and beauty And, I suspect for those like myself who worked with cameras and models in a distant misspent youth, "Snap Shot" brings back a flood of forgotten erotic memories. Thank you!

It truly takes and artist to describe the images you have shown. Only a true photographer could see this the way you have and I enjoyed reveling in the visions you showed with your words. Soft and subtle and nowhere nearly as graphic as some writers, but then this didn't need to have any more. Very sweat, and I truly hope she finds this story and remembers the event as fondly as you. Thank you for sharing such a beautiful moment.

WOW

Beautiful story, my friend. Somemsay fiction...honestly, i couldnt care either way what the truth is. It just has a feeling of being real. And hell, if you actually do have the shot, i would love to see the inspiration for one hell of an afternoon.

This doesn't even require being or truth, indeed it affirms there is truth in beauty and beauty in truth.

This does not demand the reality of an author or a photographer or a beautiful young woman - for one story-moment, they existed, in unique creations framed by time, feelings, colors, warmth,and exquisite sensitivities that can only be realized by each reader's imagination. If one million people read this, someone created one million pieces of beauty,each felt and seen in its own, personal way.

One of the best things I've read in the last 10 years - it is THE best for explaining with its excellence that we needn't seek our privacies, reliefs from work or cares, easing of life stress in mindless television, trivial texting, friendless friending, numbing noise and clutter - we need but realize that, in the quiet doings that are reading and writing, we will find other "Snap Shots" that stimulate the private, carefree raptures of our imaginations.

I hope you are photographer Jim, I hope this isn't your only writing, I hope Cynthia was beautiful and flawless and your lives perfect. For one set of moments, your writing has made me believe all those hopes are possible.. Thank you.

I love this. Funny how one event in one's life can make such a distinct impression that lasts immeasurably. Grateful for your recall.

Just saw people were giving there email, made me wonder if he would share such a special private moment. Wonderfully written by the way.

Oh wow! I want more! Encooooooore!

This was one of the best heart felt stories I have read in along time i could feeel your passion in it and the feeling of joy if it could only be so true and yes I wished he would have went to find her just to feast his eyes on the love of your life, if only in your heart thank you.

I almost didn't leave a comment after realising that I would be number 280! But this was a beautifully written and erotic story; and the little twinge of sadness at the end made it all the more real.

Bravo!

What a lovely story so filled with emotion and so descriptive you could have been there!

great work

By the title, I was prepared for disappointment. I was expecting just another half-empty glossy photo story that had sex, but not real heart. How wrong I was!

I can't stop myself from looking at the craft of the writer; from judging the tightness of the detail, the turn-of-phrase, the consistency of the characters, the development of the plot. The stories that I enjoy most are those that pull me out of the "critique" mode and into the story itself. I have no right to critique anyone, but with this story it was not an issue. I became thoroughly invested in the tale almost from the beginning - breathing with the characters, feeling, sighing, rising and falling with the heat of each moment.

Well Done my friend, and Thank You!.

A wonderful story, steamy and beautiful. It paints a vivid picture that has changed my perception!! I need to find more stories by this amazing author.

This story touched me. I'm going to look for additional works from this author.

If you are a quarter the photographer as you are a Master Author...

You sir are a Master Word Smith!

This story was amazing, it was so much more than a sex story. Will you plesase sendme the photo? Please send the photo to zekecreed@gmail.com

Your words bring back memories of another very beautiful, loving WOMAN.

Thank you

It was a very detailed and sensual story, and I loved it very much. Do you think I could see the photo? theinsomnic@yahoo.com

This story is absolutely beautiful. You have talent not only as a photographer, according to you of course, but as a writer as well. Too many stories on this site are simply about sex. You have managed to create a piece about love, deep seated emotion, and most of all passion. Bravo. I do not want to see the picture simply because I think giving Cynthia a face in my mind would detract from the absolute beauty of the story. Thank you.

Would love to see the picture. ranzinger93@gmail.com

Loved the story, my boyfriend and I read through it together. We'd love to see the picture! lily.sienkiewicz@gmail.com

Read through your story twice now and loved it both times! I'd also be interested in seeing the photo alltherage___@hotmail.com

I found you story absolutely moving. It gives a realistic view on the harshness of life.

I would love to see the picture. Please send it to:

alina_cossack@hotmail.com

I loved the story and would really like to see the picture. jayhensleyjr@hotmail.com

Your story was great! please send the pic

questionmark2.6@hotmail.com

i would love to see the picture

robvildo@yahoo.com

Great story! This would be fantastic as an Illustrated story. Keep up the great work

Can I see the pic please. hiddendragoninbox@gmail.com

wanna see that pic !! Hot, but artsy enough. celestinalovexoxo.hotmail.com

Great writing, I was taking pictures back in the mid 60s also, brought back all of the stuff you had to do to get a good exposure. Not like the DSLRs now. Thanks for a wonderful story, and some good memories. Keep writing, please!

Wonderfully written. Simply fantastic.

What a great story. I am a very amateur photographer, and the way you described everything makes it almost seem as if i took those pictures myself. I would love to see the last photo, if its still available. Iplayeadg4@yahoo.com

Most beautifully written story! I would love to see a picture of "Cynthia" laurae.obrien@yahoo.com

Very sexy and well written. I could visualise it all, from the hot suburb gardens down to the final shot. Would love to see that photo if it is still available!

ronald_athome@yahoo.com

Its amazing when you can find that one inate object that brings back such powerful childhood or teen memories. The fact that you have a photo of that moment of the thoughts in her head and the feelings rushing over you is truly special and makes you very lucky. If you are sending out that pic then i would be honored to see it. Its not very often when a photographer can say this is the day the moment and the person who helped mold my style. jamesesaker80@yahoo.com

Very good nice story & very sexy I got horny reading it . sailornz@gmail.com

Oh man, what a turn on story. You sure can milk a scene for maximum erotic effect!

I just loved this. It was the best story I've read.

Also, can I get a pic, jack_dolly@yahoo.com

A really wonderful erotic story. So sensual and with the slow build up the sense of the passion being built is overwhelming. One of the best stories I've read here on Literotica. At times I was there, with you, experiencing all you enjoyed on that afternoon.

Thanks for sharing such a special moment.

i have never read a more perfect story, it is one worth reading over and over again. The slow buildup, the passion and sensuality. The word perfect does nothing to describe how amazing this story is

Could feel how you felt at the time. I agree it is more like a love story. If you would not mind, may I see this picture of 'Cynthia'? al_longenberger@yahoo.com

classy and neat...

Wonderful story, beautifully told- however. If it is true, you had better not actually be sending people copies of that photo- at least not without 'Cynthia's' permission. If she's given you the green light, then, by all means, send away, but to do so without her permission is a) illegal, and b) a completely scummy thing to do.

It was really awesome...you really are an excellent writer and the matter was so arousing...

Please send me cynthia's picture that's with you.my mail id is :rohithmurali28@gmail.com

Wow that is some hot reading. Loved it!

This is a wonderful, sweet, and very erotic story. Thank you for writing and shareing.

Totally fantastic story, loved it. One of my favorites for sure. I would love to see the picture landon.brown6@gmail.com

I agree so much with the preceding comments, about how this website contains stories that pale in comparison to this.

It is tender, insightful and intimately hot; a wonderful expression of love and respect; rich in detail and pictographic in your word choice.

You took it at the perfect speed every detail seems to be so well planned.

The characters were alive and real. Your grammar is impeccable and the phrasing simply glides. Your picturesque vocabulary made the story a joy to read.

I would love to see the picture, but I feel as if I have already seen it through your words.

The vivid imagery you created in my mind was amazing!

I am starting to ramble on and on unnecessarily as I am just repeating praises that have been posted previously.

I do look forward to your continued writing. I know you have other stories that are as splendid as this one.

Just in case you are still sharing “The Picture” cooldoc72@gmail.com

I don't usually get really into voyeur stories but this story really got to me. It's beautifully written, not too long or too short and I can really feel all the emotions in it, the passion and the excitement. Thank you for writing such a jewel and sharing it here.

This story is amazing. I can really feel the characters.

This story was sexy & beautiful & extremely erotic. One of my new favs.

I've never commented before, but wanted to say that I think you are a gifted writer. You conjured such a warm, tangible, vivid portrait of a time and place and person. What a talent! Keep writing, please!

I loved this story. That is all :)

I never leave feedback for anyone. But your story is absolutely wonderful. So erotic and passionate. Very well done!!!

It's hard to imagine how a story can be so intensely sexual. Yes, anyone can write a story that causes a stir in the reader's pants, but it takes something as real and raw as this to cause a stir in the reader's entire body. I am in love with Cynth as much as you were on that fateful day. If your offer still stands (and if it's serious) I was wondering if I could have a look at her.

it was amazing the way you narratad your memory.... loved it :)

You prompted me to write the first review of my LIFE!

The way you captured the essence of "a cherished memory" and gave it a sense of exitement was ... priceless..

PS - love the last 3 sentences. Potrays the story perfectly.

Your story is so incredibly sexy. You wrote about your favorite picture so well I could almost envision it. I would sure love to see it.

Loved the story, the friendship, and the sharing of a special love, that first love - at least on the part of her younger lover! Thanks for the memories of long ago, although different circumstances - those early times live on forever.

This story, whether true or not, was one of the best I have ever read. It read more as a love story more than an erotic one, and captured all of the feelings, the nuances, and the background of the day, and the moment in such a way that you were totally drawn into it as if you were standing off to one side and observing it as it happened. I would say that you should try to contact her, if you haven't already, and get copies of those pictures. They sound like a real treasure that are meant to be kept.

I am not exactly sure how to put this but -

You have captured this story in perfect written work, almost like the picture of the photograph that you would have taken yourself. The pace and style coupled with the flow complimented the story so well. Pretty much the pure reason why I have made my account here. Certainly it one of the most perfect works of romance like this I have ever see. Thank you for sharing this work with us all.

If you would not mind, may I see this picture of 'Cynthia'?

pyroguekenesis_101@hotmail.com

that story was just amazing :)

Great great story. Had a similar story. Did not end so good . She was 32,me 19. Two kids . After a year she called it off. Messed my head up for years. I would do it all over again tomorrow.OHHHHHH THE THINGS SHE TAUGHT ME .Keep up the great writting .And thank you

This memory you have shared with us is a beautiful one at that. Thank you for sharing a cherished moment in your life. I would love to see the photo you toke that wonderful if you would do so i would appreciate that.

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