All Comments on 'Snap Shot'

Wow. I really like this one. Please send me some picture if you still have them. I'd really appreciate it. Thanks :)

jungstaRscr34m@gmail.com

This story is amazing. I would love to see the picture if you are still sharing. In my mind, she looks like Ali Larter for some reason. Simply beautiful.

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Calling this story 'near perfect' just wouldn't be enough. I congratulate you. I would also love to see the snap shot, if you are willing to show me.

jimmythehand1@hotmail.co.uk

I cannot ask for the snapshot as it is only two dimensional and would mean nothing to me. To you, it is 3D: it includes the smells of her bedroom and the sounds from outside and the sun flowing in and, the best of all, the warmth in her eyes.

You have brought us to a moment in time that we can all be a part of, so many years ago. I thank you for the journey and I pray you will share with us again. Thank you.

I'm love with this girl who sends me her pics too! I can soo understand your feelings when you must be looking at that pic of Cynthia. I'd love to see it, I'm asking..

Please send it to me on njgprinceofdarkness@gmail.com

I loved the innocence of the story and how it all

Played together. If you wouldnt mind i would love to see the print that inspiried it all. Dragon22206@bellsouth.net

Loved the story and would love to see the print. magicfurnell@hotmail.co.uk

such a well written story. Would love to see cythia. baypair26@yahoo.com

One of the most well written I've seen on this site.

Would love to see that pic -

lja231@hotmail.com

I would love to see Cynthia, thanks!! zurylury@yahoo.com

this was amazing and...it left me shaking...I would love to see the beauty you so admired. riahmccain@yahoo.com

Like the title says. Definitely enjoy moments like this that are real or at least believable. If the photo actually exists, send it to camirish1@netzero.net

This is so beautifully written. Would love to catch a glimpse of such a perfect moment in time. ShPecking@gmail.com

That was... incredible. truly amazing.

I would love to see what you saw. Thanks.

ejronne@gmail.com

Truly amazing piece of work, the details form so clearly with yourr retelling but I would love to see Cynthia in all her glory...midasschmoo@hotmail.com

I've never read an erotic story that was anything like "Snap Shot," I couldn't stop reading, and was completely engrossed in the story. What a soft, romantic, emotional story. Very well written. I could see every detail, smell her, feel the emotions in him as well as in her. The story was incredible. I can't wait to read more from you. Thank you so much for sharing such a beautiful memory. I even let a tear find its way down my flushed cheek at the end. I do hope that Cynthia Marshall will one day read this and remember what it was like for her. You are truely talented.

Extremely well written. I could almost smell Cynthia because of your descriptions. This is a fantasy that lives in many of us guys and you are the lucky one who got to live it for real. I'd love to see the pic. drawu1@bvunet.net Thanks.

I really liked this read. As a photographer I could appreciate posing the subject, getting the light, having the special shot to myself ( w permission!). As an author, I enjoyed the structure of the story as well as the content. Rare mistakes. Lovely description of the couple and of the surroundings. Thanks for the share!

I love every detail! Truly one of my favorites. Can I see it please? IholdMM@hotmail.com

I read your story , and it reminded me of my childhood crush , could you send me that pic of cynthia? as i lived your story again and again in my mid for weeks , i am curious . please email it to me if you can plastimont@gmail.com

Thanks

This story brings back all the awkwardness and turmoil of adolescence. Well paced and a cracking telling of the story.

I wanted to read something to pass the time ... i ended up with a tear in my eye. As a photographer myself, i am stunned by the photos you took without ever looking at them. Thank you so much for the inspiration.

The canvas that you have painted would shame Davinci! An absolutely tantalizing and heart stopping story of intimacy, passion, and ultimate love. I hope to god something even remotely profound as this ever happens to me, and I can't help but hope even more that this has happened to you. The amount of happiness that I would feel to know that some other human being experienced this would be so great, that I could only be happier if I experienced this myself. If this was fiction then you have a sick gift my friend, and if it was real, then I take my hat off to you and give you a standing ovation because you have given me something to aspire to and confirmed the beauty that is inherent to the human condition. God, I'm going to be fantasizing about this for a while. And there is no need to post a snapshot; I doubt it will live up to the canvas that you have painted in our minds. THANK YOU SO MUCH!

You're extremely talented. Awesome.

I cannot believe the detail you used to describe every little thing in that story. it is obvious that you have both an extremely vivid memory of this event and unrivaled talent at painting that pictue with words for others to share as vividly as you see it. After reading a story like that and experiencing that special time with you, I have to ask if you would be willing to share your prized photo with me, but understand if you have received too many requests at this point. Either way, thank you for the memories and I hope that whatever you do you continue writing because you obviously have an unparallelled gift. Erjams@gmail.com

I agree so much with previous comments, about how this website is filled stories that pale in comparison to this. I was captivated by how well this story read, how naturally it flowed. I would very much appreciate seeing the picture, if you would consent to send it to me at; Disturbed_rawk@hotmail.co.uk. Thank you.

Great story! You made me feel your passion - not just your passion for Cynthia, but your passion for photography too. And the narrative drew me in - it wasn't like watching the story unfold as a third party. It was being the narrator.

Thanks for the story.

As someone who enjoys/ed taking photos of women but is no longer in a position to do so I wanted t thank you for bringing back so many happy memories to me.

Not of your muse, nor even of sex, but of the feel of cameras, the expectant wait to see the shots, and the fascination with a beautiful woman.

steven jones 740 @ hotmail.co.uk

I would be pleased to see that photo! Thank you.

Thank you for this story. I have been a fan of literotica for some time and can truly say your story was captivating. If the photograph is as engrossing as the story, then I can truly say I have been served dinner and dessert. please respond to kellyj3ray@yahoo.com

The story was fantastic! In this world of disgusting, vulgar, obscene stories, this story is pure beauty. Could you send me the picture at jaiig@hotmail.com please?

It was fine until you had the montage. Then it fell apart. Still, the rest of it had actual character development unlike a lot of the stories that are posted here.

Though our story wasn't like this, this story reminds me of the first time my husband and I had sex (we were high school sweethearts). I am really glad I went to this portion of the website - brought back memories!

That is an incredible story! To think that you remembered such detail astounds me. I was greatly touched by this account and hope that I can have an experience as memorable and exciting as this.

that was amazing. i would love to see the photo send it to theshit3748@yahoo.com

Reading this story brought my memories of my not the first time but the first real time back. Such a beautifully written story. I could feel every emotion and desire. I am not sure if I want to see the snapshot, as I already have it in my mind, so vivid and beautiful. On the other hand curiosity is a bitch. Can you send the snapshot to boriskara@hotmail.com?

One of the most sensual and erotic stories I have ever read

Excellent story, 1 of the best i have read. It ended all too soon. Would love to see the pic of cynth. Please send it to holdengts_300@hotmail.com. Many thanks

Thanks for this incredible erotic story, I would love to see the snap shot, if yo can pls send the pic to cabertooth_88@rediffmail.com, Thanks..

The story a true work of art. I would love to see the pic. Email is soprano505@yahoo.com Title it Snap Shot.

P.S. Literotica should put some stories with the option of putting a picture with the story. _R

great story, enjoyed reading it:D

p.s. send picture if u can on Geostigma4515@yahoo.com

I loved this story, extremely well paced!

i really wanna see the pic, lauracrinson@yahoo.com

It really hit me at the end. this was a wonderful story, and also curious about the photo. please send it to me at xcrusaderx101@yahoo.com

ya i want to see it plz mail me at divya.gujral9@gmail.com

loved your story please send me a picture to kcampb1934@aol.com

Great story! I enjoyed it. Touching. Can you send picture to heyitslizzie@hotmail.com?

thanks!

amazing story,, curious if i can see it too, the story really hit home, ive got a girl next door im just wild about, and now this is how ive been thinking about her. convertible_kid@hotmail.com pls and thnaks

This was a beautiful sensual and erotic story. I loved every second of it. I would also love to see the picture. I like to collect beautiful pictures of every variety and that picture would be a wonderful addition to my collection.

My e-mail address is shadowriderlost@hotmail.com

quad_racing_2006@hotmail.com im always open to some reality stuff. True stories just have that wild vision. Pease send that pic. Thanks

freakingbob@hotmail.com

please =)

livrle2sk8@gmail.com

wow. simply amazing

Cjohnson_2000@hotmail.com please :)

could you send the picture to kkrrmm3000@gmail.com ?

Send that pic to hpablo04@gmail.com pls

Pilotsmallz@gmail.com please! that was beautiful. The world needs more authors like you my friend

send pic to knibb03@gmail.com please.

..... You really know how to write. You have described your wonderful life moment in great vivd detail.Thank you for telling your story. I enjoyed ready this amazing story. ( and this girl sounds fantastic, a real kind/polite/sweetheart, i would love to find a girl like that, that has the same demeanor in which you presented Cynthia with possessing).

..... Also, I would ask for the picture but i'm paranoid about strangers sending a virus to me. But i do have good virus protection so i might come back here pretty soon and request this photograph.

..... (hey,.. umm.. wait a sec, didn't you promise Cynthia that you would not show any one the photos. LOL, JK. Im sure its fine. Its been over 40 years).

..... Thank you again for writing this, and congratulations for having a wondering sensual and sexual moment that you can cherish forever.

..... Please write more stories, i would like to read more of your work.

Send that pic to vijay.g090@gmail.com

I would like to see it littleben1996@hotmail.com

sure i would love to see. yamihere31@gmail.com

i would love to see that pic.

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please send the picture to bakedlovespuds@gmail.com

This is what defines the difference between erotica and porn. The love and respect shines through after all these years, I wish that I had written it but I know that I lack the sheer talent,,,,,,,

Very well done, tasteful and erotic. Let the images be in the minds of the readers and don't send the picture, the face won't match the one in mind.

well written. I felt as if I was living the memory as it happened. Thank you.

please send it to jumbayardley@gmail.com

Wonderful story, is this story written from actual experience?

Excellent story, very well written, both touching and erotic.

Very very well written.....good use of vocabulary too! :)

The best sex story I have ever read...I wouln't call it porn...send it to playboy.

great story..well done...please send to bockey40@hotmail.com

I've never found a story on Literotica so touching and erotic at the same time. This really is a terrific piece. I'm sincerely impressed and for a pervy guy, that's a feat.

I love good stories and this is a great one. I connected with every bit and would like to read much, much more. If there is a picture I would like to enjoy it at jleoa@juno.co

i read this story through 3 interruptions throughout the day couldnt wait to get back to it.

please send to patrick33569@yahoo.com

I dont know how you came up with such an incredible piece of writing. Truly captivating.

please send to

chucklingcharlie@live.com.au

plz send to recoversrvr@yahoo.com

I was touched by your story and now have a renewed interest in picking up a camera. Thank you so much! You're a fantastic writer as well as I'm sure, photographer.

I'd love to see the picture as well, though I have a pretty real idea of what Cynthia looked like in my head already. charlierbrts55@gmail.com.

Thanks.

best story on here great stuff we want more

realky erotic would love to see the pic to macth with the one in my mind dronkbackup@gmail.com

Brought back memories of some 37 yrs. ago with Sharon. I would love to see thee pic. wolverinecon@yahoo.com. Thanks

I really enjoyed your story. Please send the pic if you will. penmate101@aol.com

Awesome story man could you please send me the pic dunritos1@gmail.com

Could you send me a copy of the photo to Sean_92_alpha@hotmail.com? Thanks

Great story, loved the work put into it. Could you send me a copy of the photograph? anonymus13561@aol.com

It's great to hear a very believable and erotic story from someone who actually knows the technical details of what they're doing. I have photographed nude models on many occasions, and although it never quite worked out quite like in this story, I must admit to falling a little bit in love with each one of them. Great story ;)

Really good story... please sen the pictures to my eamail yappavrin@hotmail.com

that was a great story. Could you send the photo to superduperfakes@aol.com

I come back again and again to read this story. It's a joy to read every time. And yes, I'd love to see the photo! dtait231@aol.com

I loved your story! I'd love to see the photograph. My email is margotelise@gmail.com

Really enjoyed this story. Thank you for sharing this! I would love to see the pic as well. Please send to keithstarblazer@hotmail.com. Thanks again!

A very fine, well-crafted story that has an abundance of merit aside from the erotic elements.

You should be warmly congratulated for the hours spent creating and refining this piece.

As a keen photographer myself I'm very envious of your protagonist. Should the final mention of the photo be true indeed, then please could you send the photo to gorgeousity@gmail.com.

Many thanks.

A beautifully written episode. Well done, Sir!

I'm not going to say this is the best story I've ever read (although it is), because any words, even those, are hopelessly trite compared to the beauty you have woven here. Thank you.

This was an exceptional story! Your words paint such a vivid picture, I could not heop but feel I was there in the room watching the scene unfold, felling the emotions from both of you. Thank you so much for sharing.

wow would love to see the photo

Heffie01@yahoo.co.uk

A masterpiece on literotica. Please send the shot of sexy Cynthia to colourtheory01@gmail.com

Very nicely written! Would like to see the photo if you still send it? somefungi@yahoo.com

I really like this story, though - in a way - I consider the end to be a little sad. It reminds me somehow, of how short and fragile life is.

I do however really like how you managed to intertwine erotic images with a sense of artistic beauty filled with emotions.

I'd love to see the picture that inspired you to write this piece. I'd very much appreciate it, if you could send it to me. Thank you. sadaeus@hotmail.com

Seperationnation@gmail.com

great story! please send the picture thebad98@hotmail.com

If it isn't a hassle I would love to see that photograph. That was possibly the best erotic story I have read. Well done. My email is lorddc@live.com