All Comments on 'Sniper's Dream'

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txrosenaynaytxrosenaynayover 18 years ago
enjoyable and...

loved it...thank you for your wonderful stories...although i don't normally read this type of story..im more into a lil bit of bdsm type stuff but this is a nice change. respectfully a fan in Texas naynay

txrosenaynaytxrosenaynayover 18 years ago
enjoyable and...

loved it...thank you for your wonderful stories...although i don't normally read this type of story..im more into a lil bit of bdsm type stuff but this is a nice change. respectfully a fan in Texas naynay

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Another fine story

Grey Eagle:

Once again different but well told. Thank You. Ronnie W.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Good story -

- but it got a bit too technical...

Lukas

NamizujsNamizujsabout 18 years ago
Great, Eagle!

Thanks for an other fine one! Any more on them? A sequel could be interesting, that is a powerful mix, USMC, CIA hot sniper, hot agent...

THX

John

bornagainbornagainabout 17 years ago
A Really Great Story

This was even exciting as E&E i loved the story here .

Pat.

Atlanta,Ga

TavadelphinTavadelphinover 9 years ago
Another quicke but still fun -

They feel like a formula as some have noted but the ingredients change a bit each time so it stays fresh enough -

LilacQueen15LilacQueen15over 4 years ago
Excellent Story!

Terrific! Entertaining 😀 story! Love the General's comment!

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

"He got ... out of his pack... she said. He asked. She whispered" that paragraph has sentences that all start with "he" "she" or "it". Killed the reading experience for me. 2 paragraphs later you went back to using names.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Unusual tactical operation. Good luck!

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