by Grey Eagle 286
loved it...thank you for your wonderful stories...although i don't normally read this type of story..im more into a lil bit of bdsm type stuff but this is a nice change. respectfully a fan in Texas naynay
loved it...thank you for your wonderful stories...although i don't normally read this type of story..im more into a lil bit of bdsm type stuff but this is a nice change. respectfully a fan in Texas naynay
Grey Eagle:
Once again different but well told. Thank You. Ronnie W.
Thanks for an other fine one! Any more on them? A sequel could be interesting, that is a powerful mix, USMC, CIA hot sniper, hot agent...
THX
John
This was even exciting as E&E i loved the story here .
Pat.
Atlanta,Ga
They feel like a formula as some have noted but the ingredients change a bit each time so it stays fresh enough -
Terrific! Entertaining 😀 story! Love the General's comment!
"He got ... out of his pack... she said. He asked. She whispered" that paragraph has sentences that all start with "he" "she" or "it". Killed the reading experience for me. 2 paragraphs later you went back to using names.