All Comments on 'Snippets - Beth'

Great. You know how to use words well. Very hot!

Excellent series, keep it up.

It would be hot if they did some S&M play. Like Beth ties him up and gives him a BJ and does some prostate massage, then after Beth meets Susan they start scheming and Susan comes in and pegs him while he is eating out Beth. Stuff like that, if its not too much for you. :)

I know its been done many times but as this story is in the " Incest" catagory I would suggest David now finds a way to fuck Mum. Then both Mum and Beth and into their Family including Susan.

This story can develop as far as you want until you get bored!

I certainly enjoyed it. Thanks

Love this chapter to the continuing series, I didn't think we had heard the last from Susan based on her reaction when she left. I very much enjoy your way with words and the style in which you write and am looking forward to seeing how you bring Susan into the mix and even though David really doesn't care for Lorn I'd love to see her pulled into the mix as well.

5 stars!

The way you put words together & bring such erotic scenes together is amazing! I must admit when I read your first story, that I had a reserved opinion. That has dissipated along with any misgivings. Some of the stories deserve a second or more chapters & I feel your writing style will do them justice.

5 Starrer just like your other stories.Not much to say but well down with the "Anonymous Lover" series

Regards DK

Again 5 stars. A good continuation of "Anonymous Lover". Will Susan make another appearance for both of them to enjoy.

Note: have yet to read the next Snippet.

2 stars because of Susan.

5 stars without a Susan

The biggest flaw that I found was the description of Lorna's hands. You started with her holding her pussy open for her brother to penetrate her, then all of a sudden she's fisting her sheets, then she's back to holding her pussy open. I'm guessing that you put in the part about fisting her sheets in the wrong location.

I liked you having Beth eat the creampie after Lorna ran her brother off. But a stronger emotional connection between David and Beth would have made this a hundred times better. 3/5