All Comments on 'Snowbound'

Please make it into a series of at least 2 or 3 chapters don't leave use hanging .

but marred by a few silly flaws which any competent editor would have pointed out.

The story was doing fine until the anal entered the mix. For it being a first time story sadly its nearly certain no-one on their first time does anal thus wrecking the total story.

I enjoyed the story very much, it was a lot of sex in such a short time span, he recovered very quickly, as for the anal that is a bit much for the first time, but I have seen it in a lot of other stories.

Please post more of the story as she is still a virgin because he was never in her pussy.

A really good story - very well written. One of the best on this site.

Nice start. And for the record, I've known a few people who've done anal for their first time. The best single experience of *my* sex life was a pretty lingerie clad catholic girl who took it in the ass for her first time before she'd even sucked a cock, let alone taken one vaginally.

Gasoline explodes even when not confined. Good thing most busses run on Diesel which does not explode even when confined. As Disease is essentially an oil. Bad thing you need to pre-heat disel to start an engine.