All Comments on 'Snowed In'

by voluptuary_manque

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rangoonrangoonover 13 years ago
over too soon

It was on it's way to a spectacular story after the first night, then it rushed to an end. Stretch it out! You did a great job setting it up early. Very hot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
I liked it

your story started out very good but what was the rush to finish you tied up the endding well all "n" all good story

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
I know it is fiction, but...

Texas A&M has never had cheerleaders or a cheerleading squad. Otherwise, I wish the story had been stretched out longer.

Boxlicker101Boxlicker101over 13 years ago
Barbara Cartland Lives!

Or, if she doesn't, her work goes on. There was a pretty good buildup, and an interesting premise, but it just didn't deliver. I realize this is Literotica, not Smutica, but I have come to expect a lot more raunchiness than this story had.

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