All Comments on 'Snowed In Ch. 01'

Another fantastic, fantasticly told story - or the first part, I guess I should say. I loved the balance between the mundane everyday things and the nastyness of the sex scenes - it added a fevered pitch to scenes like Sherry with the remote, and the last scene :)

Though it's not something I normally fantasize about, Vanessa being pregnant, with a swelling belly and breasts that she doesn't do much to hide was really exciting and kinky.

Don't worry at all about how long you make the story - I'm sure that the more you write it the way you want, and make it 'your own', the better and hotter it will be ;)

Excellent story telling abilites. Sounds sort of like my own situation. I could tell without looking at the by line that the author is female--but that only adds to the enjoyment.(God I'm perverted to like this) I'll bet you could write about anything though.

There is no other way to say this:

That was utterly fucking amazing! Not a single, blessed thing is wrong with the way this story was written. Nothing. I'd *kill* to be able to write this well, make characters such as these and weave such a colorful tale.

Please, let there be more. For the love of all that is good in this world, WRITE MORE!

I eagerly anticipate the next installment.

WOW

Dear,

I wish i could write in English with te same kwality like you are doing it. Reading your storys have bin given me very much plesure, it's nice written and erotic, i like to give you a virtual kiss for that,

on a place you may choose;-)

Well written, don't see alot of good grammer and spelling in some of these stories. I'm not good with the mixture of Brit and American, "preggers" isn't Floridian. Good job!!!

So well written, god if only i could write as good as this. I printed the story and have since read it 3 times, twice with my wife, she also thinks it's excellent i know she gets very turned on reading it.. Well done and thanks for the good read

way to confusing you should do a rewrite and start with one couple and when finished go to another stop jumping around it is to hard to follow i stopped after the first page you never even explain who all the people are you just throw out names and expect us to figure it out bad way to keep readers

Loosing interest quickly youre trying to be tooo complicated. Boring....

I disagree with the complaints about being too complicated, or having too many characters. You have approached the story line more like a regular novel, and I appreciate the quality of your writing. I was able to follow each character's introduction just fine. I love the way this story is unfolding, it has a very true-to-life feel about it. Please, please continue this story, as I, for one, would like to read how it all plays out. Great sex scene descriptions too!

Excellent work, you're a good writer! Thanks for sharing this with us.

And this is the BEST family story ever written on Literotica! Bar None...

Ever single chapter is superbly done filled with a good premise of a family being 'stuck together' and all those delicious tnings that occurred in the privacy of their home.....I swear to god they should make a movie about this masterpiece! Nicole you are my #1 always and forever ❤️

Well written, developed characters and of course hot!

Please look at tags on other stories to get an idea of what will help readers find your story, or even to be aware of what it involves. Things like "neal eyes," "sherry gasped," and "melanie sex" mean nothing to anyone that has not read your story.

I miss you