All Comments on 'Snowed in the Dorm'

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ErotonautErotonautover 12 years ago
Nice, but definitely needs a follow-up

Looks like Suzie needs to be dragged out of her shell a little.

ErotonautErotonautover 12 years ago
Ah, it's a sequel

Realise now this is a follow-up to "The Girl Next Door - In College". You have *got* to give the guy a break: not every girl will take him *almost* all the way, surely?

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
really good

Love a story that has some degree of believability to it. You combined that with some tenderness and I thought you made the guy sound real. All in all a bit of a rarity on this site.

thank you

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