by blacknight99
Glad to see that you have crafted a man who isn't intrinsically evil. Too many stories are built on the premise that men would gladly use and anise every woman they find for their own gratification.
Your story is better, your protagonist is more than a walking cock, he's a man who has a moral compass. I can't wait to see what happens next.
So far, this is one really intriguing tale. I already empathize with the girls and Randy.
An intriguing beginning, enough sex but a proper plot and well written.
What an opening, it's like gothic-fantasy-non consent-mind control-sci fi with actual personalities.
Blown. A Way.