by blacknight99
Yet I can hardly complain at such a concise and complete conclusion.
Other than, it was Rushed!
lol
Thanks for a good story, it was a fun read :)
This was a fine story. I'm looking forward to reading more of yours.
asianToy
Normally mind control stories aren't my cup of tea, but this certainly is the exception that proves the rule as they say. Extremely well done.