by SweetLittleLiar
..that this is the first public comment. This is fine and gentle and sensuous. There were choices of language which jarred slightly: I can't quite imagine him entering her like a wave crashing on a rock. But the tale is so sensually good that they are hardly noticeable, and I only mention this example in a helpful way.
A lovely tale. It worked for me. Love to read more.
OTHER GREAT STORY. SO NICE TO COME HOME TO.
SO VERY EROTIC LONG LAST SEX. GREAT BUILD UP
TO THIS EXCELLENT STORY.
Loved it, loved the heat between these two, so awesome to read this. Nothing but straight hot sex ... but how hot it is! Keep it up Liar; I'll be reading your other stories too.
.... because your story has a realistic aspect to it, and that realism tells me it's a first-hand experience and not a sweet little lie at all, you naughty thing.
More, please!